[Report This]Date: October 13 2012 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 1 Getting Acquainted
Really, really loved this story, and favorited it. It's a shame you're still not writing new material on here.
Date: August 17 2011 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 1 Getting Acquainted
This is looking good so far. Tim seems like a nice guy though, very polite. I'm eager to see what happens next.
Date: February 10 2010 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 1 Getting Acquainted
OMG Pamela this stry Is Getting as Hot as In & Out could u do One more show of force here however and put them both into your Mouth together and threatten to swallow them but then let them out; That wouold be so Cool! PammyBaby! oops I'm sorry I used the Pammy word, Sory Goddess won't happen again your Friend
David
Date: January 08 2010 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 1 Getting Acquainted
I think ever time you add a new chapter your have added anotther fan! Pamela! your writing does Rock please let all of your talents Out! don't hold out on us Cause I see a new young star waiting to shine!
Date: January 05 2010 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 1 Getting Acquainted
Hi, Pamela
Something I really like about giantess Pamela in all the chapters (I hope I can explain this properly)...the way she shows her complete control by never really losing her temper with her pets. She gives an order and either they comply or they face the very creative consequences she comes up with for them. By doing so, she exhibits not only her physical superiority, but also her intellectual superiority. And the way she makes them put on a show for her doing the most demeaning things only serves to highlight their insignificance in her world. Thanks for writing this great story!
Author's Response: Thank you. My D/s background is where I get a lot of inspiration. The mind is the best part of a scene. The body just follows along.
Date: December 28 2009 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 1 Getting Acquainted
Hi Pamela! I Just wanted to say you Rock! I loved this story from day 1 From your detailed discriptions to your creative twists like saving tim from the Hawk, to the very humiliating but Erotic punishments you make seem so real to reader! please Continue this and all your wonderful Works! And Thank you! for sharing with us all!
David
Author's Response: David, Thanks for the compliment. Erotic punishments are the best, aren't they? I'm glad I can make it real for you.
[Report This]Date: December 26 2009 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 Getting Acquainted
Hi, Pamela
I've never taken the time to write in response to reading a story before, but I wanted to tell you how much I enjoy this story and hope you continue with it. Pamela is so unbelievably inventive and clever in making her pets helplessly bend to her wishes! I've enjoyed the entire story and how Pamela uses humiliation and shame as training tools. In that vein, I think it would be cool to see how you might write a scene in a future chapter where Pamela moves Tim and his sister into cages and trains them to act like little animals. Whatever you could come up with, I'm sure it would be great and I would look forward to devouring it word-by-word. Thanks so much for your contribution.
Author's Response: Actually, it is funny you say that because I have been working on using my love of my ferrets with my interest in the size-differential writings I have been working on. So yes, you will see them being introduced to my ferret cages. I have recently lost one, and another is quite ill, so instead of five, I will only have three, so adding Tim and Jen to the now-open cage will be a fun way to get over the loss. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with me!
Date: December 01 2009 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 1 Getting Acquainted
I would not change the ending of the story at all. It ended as it should have. Again, you might want to expand on the Pamela character's background. Do not change Tim in any way nor give him any background; he is a mystery and that is the way it should be. This story focuses on the Pamela character and that, too, is the way it should be.
Author's Response: So you think I should rewrite some background information about me into the story? Or do another one, with more information in IT? And since I am so new to this genre, I didn't give him much background because I couldn't think of any to give him! I felt like I was cheating, but am glad it did not come across that way. Thanks for the input. -- Pamela
[Report This]Date: December 01 2009 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 1 Getting Acquainted
(I originally reviewed this story but deleted my review so I could expand on it...)
This story is very very good. In fact, while I am a long-time visitor to this site, I just now registered simply so I could positively review this story.
The narrative is of a considerably higher quality than I have seen in most other stories. If I was a publishing editor and this story was submitted to me, I'd recommend some grammatical tweaks and other minor narration clarifications. (Perhaps write in the 3rd person...?) You might even want to consider expanding it with even more character development for the Pamela character. Pamela, you might even consider submitting this story to a fetish-related magazine.
Something that I very much enjoyed was the apparent ease with which the narration came. It flowed well, was not choppy nor amateurish, and it almost seemed that you enjoyed writing it. I envy that because I would find good narration personally difficult to write.
Overall, though, the story idea itself is excellent and, as a man with the tiny-man fetish, it is much more pleasing coming from a woman; I don't feel like guy is trying to verbally jack me off.
Pamela, you definitely have talent. I'd love to ask you some questions about yourself and this story...
Thanks for posting it! I look forward to reading more of your work.
Author's Response: I started in third person and then switched it. Next time I will do third person and see if that is actually easier. Feel free to email me at pamelapleases@aol.com with any questions or comments. I'd like to learn more about the clarifications and tweaks you mentioned so I can fix them. And I'd consider sending to a magazine if I knew of any! I am too new to know that kind of stuff just now, but am interested in learning more. I did enjoy writing it. My background is more in the BDSM/Dominant/submission world so I think it translated well to a Giantess theme. Thank you for your kind words of encouragement.
Date: November 30 2009 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 1 Getting Acquainted
If I ever get shrunken and lose my memory I sure hope not to end up at your doorstep Pamela...Or do I? Great story! hope hawk drops Tim for some more of your loving! (eating him sounds like a good idea btw!)
Author's Response:
I don't know, but eating sounds so final..and licking sounds more erotic. I guess I prefer eroticism to cannibalism? Oh wait, I do think I see the hawk circling now!
Date: November 28 2009 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 1 Getting Acquainted
I write only for myself if others enjoy whats been written then it is a bonus for me,i joined this forum to share a small part of myself to others,i could not write about a subject that i myself could not relate to,you must be a very talented writer to be able to carry out such a task.I would add if i may writing for another you must be able to give at least a small part of your self to the reader to make the story come to life,other wise they are just words on a page.
Good luck with your stories Amanda.
Date: November 28 2009 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 1 Getting Acquainted
Mmm i find that strange...are you writing to please another?..
Amanda.
Author's Response: I guess some authors write because they have an idea and want to express it, but I tend to write things that will please others. I find it challenging as well as rewarding. All my friend told me was that I should be a giantess who finds a small man, and then write about what I would to to him. So that is what I tried to do.
[Report This]Date: November 28 2009 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 1 Getting Acquainted
Hi Pamela i do not normally read the stories about giantesses but i read your bio and was curious about your perspective regarding this kind of this fetish,i was pleasently surprised well done.
Amanda.
Author's Response:
My friend purposefully told me NOT to read other stories at all -- because he wanted me to have a "fresh" perspective. It is not a fetish or fantasy of "mine," but I would send him the story several chapters at a time, and he seemed to be pleased with them. I just posted the rest of the story, and am curious how it will be accepted (or not) by people who have this fantasy. Thanks for your note.
Pamela