Reviewer: rghud945 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28 2024 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 3

I didn’t pay much attention to this story for quite some time since both Shrinker (instead of Giantess) and Unaware are not really my things. As I finally decided to read it today, I gotta say it is interesting in a unique way.

The ending of first chapter is very intriguing. The change of Aleena’s demeanor when she aimed and how she told Clara and Michelle to come at different times make her extremely fishy but I simply can’t grasp the motive of her doing such thing. Turns out she really is just that yandere big sis who wants to keep Michelle all to herself? Again, I think the plot here is quite over the top, almost illogical, just like the one in “Victimless Crime”. But the suspense does make me want to read to the end, you know… as if curious to see if you can really wrap up the story and explain everything.

As I think about it, the title “Hopeless Romantic” probably spoiled the ending right from the start. But, compared to the plot, the description of the emotions and thoughts of Clara is terrifyingly logical and realistic, like, if I am in her position I would probably react just like her. Well… I have much empathy and definitely feel sorry for her.

Now, since you even said you had the most fun writing chapter 3, I do notice some commonalities between this story and “Victimless Crime”: As if focusing on the fear, hopeless and suffering of the tiny female lead, just remind me of Aki28’s work. I am just wondering, could this “Despair Porn” be your main kink as well?

 

A few typo:

C1

There were too large mounds visible on her thin white shirt – two

C2

It was extremely strong – wasn’t

C3

So close friends to recall - No

her current position. encouraged Clara to escape - ,

No way, don’t me - tell

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review! Just like you, I'm not too big a fan of shrinking at all, as I like actual giantesses far more. This will probably be my last shrinking story for a while because of that. So I'm glad I managed to craft a shrinking story that another growth fan seemed to enjoy!

And yes, "despair porn" is a good way to describe my main kink. What's the point of writing giantess literature if you don't focus on how the tiny's mind is warped by their presence and actions, I say. Nice catch, lol.

And gotcha, I went and fixed those typos real quick. I really need to find a proofreader or something before I publish these, lmao. So thank you for helping me in the meantime! And thank you once again for the review.

Reviewer: Socalspeck Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2023 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great first chapter, can’t wait to read the rest!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Glad you’re looking forward to it.