Really good start, not much to say as I’m no grammar master myself. The flow of reading was well paced, and the managing to avoid long descriptions of the characters by weaving it into the story it’s self. I never really have much to say on these reviews, but if I want more stories of this type and I really aught to start reviewing and making the others seen. So though it maybe an over used or cliche plot I’m happy to see more of it