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Reviewer: Wholia Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09 2023 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm super loving this story! It's so adorable. This is definitely my kind of story. Thanks for sharing! Looking forward to more of this! <3



Author's Response:

Thanks Wholia! I love seeing reviews from you. They always make my day! :D

Reviewer: she8sharks Signed [Report This]
Date: October 02 2023 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

That one hurt at the end D; all begging and everything probably had a snot bubble.. work for free.. she's got to stop thinking like that...  welp if that's a villain origin story she's bullet proof she could be up for hire for gangsters as a bodyguard or if she wants money or a bounty hunter if the gangsters refuse to pay her... There's probably alot of BBQ animals in that park now if she can't afford food haha



Author's Response:

Lol yeah, Nathalie is a good girl. She'll do the right thing even if it isn't going to help her situation.

Reviewer: klinza Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2023 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

she is a bit of an adorable clutz, i kind of want to see her accidently eat or drink her boss... well ex boss.. she could try transporting lilis as she would be fast. getting rid of pest creatures, being a cruise in the water. taking people on tours. of course it all has to go wrong each time lol 



Author's Response:

That's a good idea! I considered it when planning chapter 4, but my other idea won out in the end. Glad you find her character appealing :) 

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