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Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 07 2024 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Carrie finds help

Thanks! Nothing too prescriptive on a storyline but mYbe something like Heather steals the machine and begins shrinking things for her playful amusement. Marie and others try to stop her and Heather finds herself in so much trouble she has to grow into an actual giantess to literally tower over the problems her playfulness has created. Just spinning quick thoughts!



Author's Response:

I’ll keep ideas in mind.  If you want to discuss ideas you can message me on here or on discord! 

Reviewer: aHomester Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2024 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Carrie finds help

Heather almost redeemed herself

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2024 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Carrie finds help

To my earlier comment...Heather and her personality would be great for funding a way for the machine to go in reverse and grow her into a giantess! She'd have so much fun with Eddie, Marie, and the whole city!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I do read these reviews and take ideas into consideration.  If you’d like to discuss ideas more feel free to reach out! 

Reviewer: Shrinkyx Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03 2024 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Carrie finds help

really amazing part



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! 

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