[Report This]Date: March 24 2024 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Carrie's Last Day
I am sad to see this at its end, as it's been my favorite story series since you started it, with each part getting better. I always got very excited to see a new chapter more than anything else on this site for the past while. Thank you. I really do good for part 4. I want to see more stuff with Heather perhaps getting more victims, as well as eventually possibly meeting her own fate
Looking extremely forward to whatever you do next!
[Report This]Date: March 07 2024 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Family Bonding
Yes! My idea is I'd love a next story segment to center on the machine being updated with the capability to go in reverse and grow things. I really want Heather to test it out after seeing shrinking things go to her head. Imagine if the whole city was hers? Who could stop her? Would be so much fun!
[Report This]Date: March 04 2024 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Family Bonding
I continue to really enjoy this story! Any thoughts on what you might cover in part 4?
Author's Response:
If I do a pet 4 I’ve got a few ideas on my head. If you wanted to talk ideas either message me here or on discord!
[Report This]Date: March 03 2024 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 1 - A Little Sunbathing
Amazing concept and writing
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: February 21 2024 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 1 - A Little Sunbathing
Hey! Did you plan to continue this story? I love this series, and would still love to see the shrinking machine go in reverse!
Author's Response:
Story is still continuing!
Date: January 28 2024 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Carrie's Company
“He was standing there, fondling a pair of her underwear against his face that he had found in the trash“ What chapter did this happen in or is it yet to be seen?
Author's Response:
Callback to Shrunk in the Model City, Part 1 - Chapter 8!
[Report This]Date: January 07 2024 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Carrie finds help
Thanks! Nothing too prescriptive on a storyline but mYbe something like Heather steals the machine and begins shrinking things for her playful amusement. Marie and others try to stop her and Heather finds herself in so much trouble she has to grow into an actual giantess to literally tower over the problems her playfulness has created. Just spinning quick thoughts!
Author's Response:
I’ll keep ideas in mind. If you want to discuss ideas you can message me on here or on discord!
[Report This]Date: January 06 2024 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Carrie finds help
Heather almost redeemed herself
[Report This]Date: January 04 2024 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Carrie finds help
To my earlier comment...Heather and her personality would be great for funding a way for the machine to go in reverse and grow her into a giantess! She'd have so much fun with Eddie, Marie, and the whole city!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I do read these reviews and take ideas into consideration. If you’d like to discuss ideas more feel free to reach out!
Date: January 03 2024 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Carrie finds help
really amazing part
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
[Report This]Date: December 04 2023 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Carrie's Poor Plan
Two weeks of torture in-bound
Author's Response:
Yep!
Date: December 03 2023 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Carrie's Poor Plan
Loved this chapter!!! I love the unaware Marie with Carrie being shrunk. Can’t wait to see how Carrie survives for 2 weeks. Is the next one coming soon?
Author's Response:
Thank you! Hoping to be able to continue this regularly!
[Report This]Date: October 29 2023 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Revenge Finally Achieved
Another great chapter! I'd love if the shrinking machine went in reverse and grew Erin to mega sized. The actual city would become her toy with Marie getting a front row to what a truly gigantic and unstoppable giantess Erin could do to gave fun and satisfy herself with her tiny friends.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: October 27 2023 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 1 - A Little Sunbathing
Nice part!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: September 16 2023 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 1 - A Little Sunbathing
Oops forgot to rate
Date: September 16 2023 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 1 - A Little Sunbathing
Really enjoying this part of the story! Loving the semi-aware vs the unaware of the previous parts! Also glad to see mention of crush via dick slap, the most underutilized SW/GM/GC trope imo.
Hope to see more of the previous cast show up (especially Heather)!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! More to come!
[Report This]Date: September 16 2023 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Dan's Toys
Absolutely amazing chapter! Love seeing M/f stuff and this delivered big time! Hope to see more Dan!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!
Date: September 07 2023 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 1 - A Little Sunbathing
You write some of the best stories on here! I can't wait to see what else you have in store. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: September 06 2023 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Marie's problems are BEHIND her
Nice chapter. I loved the unaware threesome.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: September 06 2023 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Marie's problems are BEHIND her
GODDAMN THIS WAS HOT AS HELL! YOU SIR KNOW HOW TO WRITE!
I am absolutely 100% serious when I say that this was one of the hottest chapters I ever read. This is pure perfection.
By far the best part was when Carrie got eaten by Marie’s anus AND SHE WAS COMPLETELY UNAWARE! You make this shit come alive my friend!
Easy 100/10!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! It was a lot of fun to write!