[Report This]Date: February 13 2024 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 13
Very fun story. Was happy it had a happy ending. Tbh didn't expect one when I saw the last chapter. Tho, I guess that goes to show that Liza was right about Mia being too lax. Then again, that was probably how she got Mia in on the operation anyway.
Everything made perfect sense and came around quite nicely. Loved it
Author's Response:
Appreciate the review, thanks!
[Report This]Date: February 11 2024 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 13
Well, I really enjoyed the 2 stories you posted on this website. I liked the creativity of the "hardgum" mechanic, the plots to overcome it, and the eventual harrowing escape. I thought the plotting of the story was really solid the entire way through. It might have been nice to see some voluntary action at the end with the guards who believe in freedom of choice, but hey, it's a good solid ending.
Thanks for posting these here, really appreciate it.
Author's Response:
I also thought about adding something at the end there, but oh well. I figured Garrick was veeeery tired by that point.
Appreciate the words, happy you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: February 05 2024 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 12
Aha! I thought Garrick might have trouble with Mia! It's too bad he didn't come with the girl, but I like the way this is going so far. Looking very much forward to reading more. Hopefully the other two guards remember that Garrick is supposed to meet the officer.
[Report This]Date: January 29 2024 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 11
I really like how in this story and in the previous story you have really ramped up the stakes for our little protagonists. I very much enjoy how you have devised situations that make sense for Garrick to escape, and I found the twist of slave 4 to be unexpected and very cool!
I realize this story is completed, but I am still looking forward to how things develop when Garrick gets to town. How he can notify the guards without being caught by the corrupt guard.
Thanks for an interesting story with a great plot, and a real sense of adventure.
Author's Response:
Feels great reading your kind words, glad you like it!
[Report This]Date: December 26 2023 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 9
I really love the mind games. What Garrick did was pretty interesting and I like how Liza subtly tries to make them become more obedient by them trying to get the best out of their time there and also contrasting herself with some of the women she lets use them.
This is a really fun story. Really curious to see what happens next tho. I'd imagine Garrick is gonna get punished badly and maybe Martin too? Maybe Martin gets pissed at him. Hopefully at least one of them makes it out.
Author's Response:
The mind games aspect of this story wasn't planned, it just naturally panned out that way, so I'm glad to hear you're enjoying it!