[Report This]Date: July 13 2023 8:09 AM Title: 01. A date with Emily
Yessss!!! I fucking love this story!! I'm so glad you reuploaded it!
I noticed a few changes here and there which definitely made it an easier read. It would have been quicker to just copy and paste but the fact that you read through it again and made some improvements really shows how much you treasure these stories. I'm so glad to have you as an author on this website. Thank you, Milla <3
Anyway, making this a series us such a good idea. After having gone through all that, I really wanted to see where they take their love! Who wouldn't want to have a little shrunken boyfriend or giant girlfriend :p
What a lucky bastard!!
Vore is great and I would have been happy as well if he was simply digested, but this is so good! Maybe we'll see loads of mouthplay and vore tease kkk.
Ok, I'll leave it here otherwise I'll be writing a whole book... absolutely love it and can't wait for the next chapter! You're a blessing to the community and I hope you stick around for many many more years.
Author's Response:
Yeah, it was my first ever story published, and I must admit I love it too! This story depicts one of my favorite gentle vore scenarios, one I'd love to live if it was possible!
I thought no one would actually note the changes... I'm truly impressed now o_o. I did the changes to improve quality and mostly the dialogues and feelings... imo they made the story slightly better, but who knows? Hehehe...
In this case, this collection will show stories which are happening in the Moon Shine restaurant. Emily and her now tiny boyfriend will be in a continuation to this chapter, but that continuation will not be in this series, being a full, independent, probably multi-chapter gentle story.
Thank you for liking and enjoying this story that much! :D
[Report This]Date: July 13 2023 8:01 AM Title: 01. A date with Emily
Awwww, this was adorable-
I've never seen "willing" prey, or at first willing, written this well, and I'm so glad they had a happy ending! This was the perfect bedtime story for me, thanks for writing it d84;a039;
Author's Response:
Awww, thank you <3 ! I tried to make this story not only gentle but romantic, and I'm happy I reached my goal, considering your lovely review! <3 I only hope my other romantic stories are as good as this one for you and the other readers.
[Report This]Date: July 08 2023 10:05 PM Title: 01. A date with Emily
Good to see this back up again! I enjoyed it the first time around too.
Author's Response:
Thank you, Timescribe! I couldn't let my first story out of the site ^-^