Reviews For Shrunk At School
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Reviewer: DX Machina Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 23 2009 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 1 Kicking Things Off

It's well-done, but a bit choppy -- each chapter reads more like part of a choose-your-own-adventure story than a full-blown chapter. You've got a good plot, and your ideas are intriguing; take some time and expand them a bit, and you'll really have something.

Reviewer: VoyuerFan Signed [Report This]
Date: October 20 2009 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 1 Kicking Things Off

yeah no biggy thoug

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