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Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2023 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 6

It never dawned on me before; but perhaps being digested by Trish's sexy body might actually lead to a greater existence and untold pleasures for Loni.

Nice descriptions of Loni being digested, especially like Trish adding a green glow so that Loni could see where he was and what was happening.

My only complaint is grammatical, you keep using "her" instead or "he" when referring to Loni.

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