Date: December 22 2023 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Tits Up
Hope you update this story, been checking often to see if an update is out.
Date: September 01 2023 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Tits Up
It was a good setup for a chapter but I wish more had happened like it chapter 2. You should have Alex go back to get his phone since he already lost his first one. I'd make it so he went in unaware as she slept but things go south when she wakes up while he's inside.
[Report This]Date: August 31 2023 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Tits Up
Nice chapter! Felt like it ended a little prematurely after the build up of falling inside the milk duct. Alex should tell Tiffany about the lost phone (because you can’t leave that in there!) and then have her shrink him again, only he’ll have to get out with her help this time (maybe borrow a breast pump from friend or something?) either way, keep it up!
Date: August 28 2023 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Tits Up
I liked how this chapter started and where it was headed but I felt like it ended prematurely and could have done more. I was hoping he'd fall all the way into her milk, and be stuck in her for a bit like Tiffany was in chapter 2. Like if she had gone and worked out not knowing he was insider her boob still.