Date: April 21 2023 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
I would love to see the Jake thing slow played…maybe mike can help but mention it a few times n his wife is trying to put it out of her mind but the more Mike reminds her the more curious she is to see it again…just my thoughts…I love the whole story and that was a fun twist very fun
[Report This]Date: April 21 2023 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 7
I think we should see more of Jake and Sarah interaction around "Mikey" 😈
Date: April 20 2023 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 7
Who the fuck is Jake? He was just getting done with Star last chapter and suddenly some Jake guy is in the story?
Author's Response:
He was introduced a few chapters ago. Sarahs assistant.
Date: April 20 2023 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 7
So so good ! Perfect turn ! Love it
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: April 19 2023 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love It!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: April 18 2023 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Excelente historia bro, continue y no se rinda
Author's Response:
Gracias!
Date: April 15 2023 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, really love the dynamics to this story! Definitely would like to see more of Starr!
Author's Response:
She'll come back after a few more chapters and there will be alot of her at that point
[Report This]Date: April 13 2023 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 4
I'm betting Starr will not only enable Maggies disrespect for her father but also encourage it. excellent work, keep it up
[Report This]Date: April 09 2023 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh my... The potential here is on another level. Waiting for the wife/mom to make her grand entrance as this story progresses.