Date: February 18 2024 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 16
The dynamic between Mike, Sarah, and Jake were the best part. The scene with Mike getting batted by Jake's member is primo stuff. It's the type of humiliation I love to see. Good stuff.
[Report This]Date: August 16 2023 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh pls make the alternative story I bet it will be a good one too!!!!
[Report This]Date: July 12 2023 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Chapter 16 can’t be the end. The cliffhanger is too great. Why is Sarah “smirking” when she says she won’t let Jake’s dick get too close to her husband? The readers need to know!! Amazing story.
[Report This]Date: July 12 2023 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Chapter 16 can’t be the end. The cliffhanger is too great. Why is Sarah “smirking” when she says she won’t let Jake’s dick get too close to her husband? The readers need to know!! Amazing story.
Date: July 10 2023 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was the best story I read on this site. I would like to see a story with Starr where she doesn’t return the man.
Date: July 10 2023 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was the best story I read on this site. I would like to see a story with Starr where she doesn’t return the man.
[Report This]Date: July 09 2023 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 16
Honestly this is actually way much better than I expected but I do want to see the alternate side of the story so I say let the Writer be the writer :) (I can't wait to see this alternate story)
[Report This]Date: July 09 2023 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 16
absolutely sweet ending. compliments to both you and your friend for fantastic writing.
kinda curious what the alternative ending is though 😈
[Report This]Date: July 09 2023 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 16
Happy to see the story finished with a great kind ending. Been reading your stories for a long time and proud of you for finishing this story! :)
Date: July 09 2023 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 16
I think that it was a nice good ending to this story. I am curious what will happen in the bad end if he will become more of a toy or pet to the new family or something.
[Report This]Date: July 08 2023 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 16
I love alternate endings. Several cliffhangers you could go down and create more storylines for this one. Would love to see someone do different endings from other older stories.
Great story btw. Definitely hope you keep writing!
[Report This]Date: July 08 2023 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 16
I love alternate endings. Several cliffhangers you could go down and create more storylines for this one. Would love to see someone do different endings from other older stories.
Great story btw. Definitely hope you keep writing!
Date: July 07 2023 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
This so far has been the best story I read on this site. Wish I could get an image of Starr next chapter tho cause she the best character.
Date: July 06 2023 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 15
I really enjoyed the chapter 14, getting to see more of Sarah & Jake’s personality and the new relationship they are forming. I’m extremely curious about Jake’s planned conversion with Mike and how that will go. I also find it intriguing that Sarah admitted to still loving Mike, just upset with his attitude.
Starr seems extremely cruel and has no concern or care for Mike, I’m hoping Mike begins to realize that he is much better off with a sexy wife that loves him and her sexy young stud.
I’m hoping for a mix of gentle but a little bit of bittersweet. I’d like to see Mike grow back to at least 5 inch. (He wouldn’t be completely lost and he could still give his wife a little bit of pleasure. Ideally I’d like to see Sarah get her needs met by her new boyfriend while including her mini husband in every part of the action. I hope that Mike can except the bittersweet reality that his wife loves him and still wants him but he needs Jake’s help to make sure all her sexual needs are taken care of as well.
I love all the writing of this story so far and I’m definitely not ready for it to end. Incredible story, very well done.
[Report This]Date: July 03 2023 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Dialogue? Perfect. Especially the chuckling when it was suggested Mike would be placed back on the tits. Tantalizing— the laughter did not need to be explored.
This is such a great story. I hope Mike starts with the a usive language. His complete clulessness is so entertaining.
I wonder why Jake wants to ask Mike himself?
[Report This]Date: July 03 2023 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 14
Holy shit that just got even more intense like wow I absolutely am going to enjoy this series a whole lot im like left speechless
Date: July 01 2023 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 13
My anticipation keeps growing for every new chapter you write. Thank you for keeping the story about Mike going. Mike does seem to be stuck in a sticky situation, it seems does have a growing fascination with Starr, but Starr is definitely a wild card and has me guessing, how far she would go with her bullying and punishing of Mike. Between Sarah, Jake, and Star, there are so many wild and crazy things that could happen to him. It will be interesting to see, I definitively wanna see Mike survive Starr’s mouth and make it home to his wife Sarah.
[Report This]Date: July 01 2023 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 13
Interested to see where this ends up going. Although with what usually happens to “snacks” it prob won’t go well for the little guy. Look forward to seeing more :)
Date: June 23 2023 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 12
It’s great to see you’re continuing the story!! I look forward to each new addition and your excellent writing. Maybe Starr should find him or he gets stuck somewhere on Starr without her knowing. It will be interesting to see if Starr continues to torture him like before or she treats him kinder, if she does find or interact with him.
I’m intrigued and excited by Sarah’s lustful desire and decision to continue things with Jake, Sarah might just enjoy having Jake as a “boyfriend” and Mike as her shrunken husband. Maybe Jake should be the one to pick up Maggie from Starr’s, what would Starr think about Sarah and Jake’s new relationship.
Lots of incredible ways you can go and I’m very excited for the next chapter. I know you’ll come up with an awesome and sexy idea. You’re ideas have been great!!