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Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19 2023 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 3

Really nice story so far.  Love the boss being entombed in Andrea's snot.

There are a few grammatical errors through out; but nothing major that is distracting from the overall story line.

Andrea seems way to accommodating, almost scheming in nature.  I think the boss has been taken for a ride by Andrea, and I hope she does just that.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked that. I know that sort of this can gross out some people.

Unlike most of my stories, I had little time to revise this one. What you are seeing is very close to the first draft. I hope to go back and fix that later, if time allows. I hope it didn't detract from your experience.

...and who knows? :)

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