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Reviewer: amerdism Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2023 2:41 AM Title: A Fateful Encounter

Sry forgot to rate

Reviewer: smoldegen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 04 2023 5:29 AM Title: A Fateful Encounter

So amazing!

The intro to Chapter 3 describing T.I.N.A.'s apocalyptic approach towards Ash's planet had me feeling some type of way. The power and chaos that came from the mere sounds of T.I.N.A.'s steps as she walked towards the planet, her scale relative to the planets, your descriptions of it all, they sent me.

I've been thinking about it all day!

Thank you so much for your work, truly a blessing to the size community.



Author's Response:

You flatter me haha. I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 29 2023 10:24 PM Title: A Fateful Encounter

There several experiments that T.I.N.A could try, more then just terminating the planets. She could extract the inhabitants and put them into new environments, even leaving with them equipment and some infrastructure with them depending. Start her own petri dish worlds that are just for observation. Have some shoes to high heels that she makes the tines live on after termination, one that unworn, one worn by her, and one that Ashta wore. Or even better, have them develop for a while snd then gift the shoes to Ashta, who would be completely unaware, see how long and how things develop.There is also see how survival works in carpet or other common surfaces. 
Again, eagerly await for more!

Reviewer: Questathana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 29 2023 8:04 PM Title: A Fateful Encounter

Love it!

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2023 11:17 PM Title: A Fateful Encounter

Can’t wait to see whats next!

Reviewer: Glaazius Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27 2023 9:07 PM Title: A Fateful Encounter

Really love this story.

And your writing is splendid!

Cant wait for the next chapters

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