Date: December 14 2023 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 1: How It Begins
I hope you can come back and finish the story!! It's really interesting and fun!!!
[Report This]Date: March 24 2023 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 1: How It Begins
The author has a clear understanding of what draws some to the genre of Otome games and uses that understanding to great effect as the story moves beat for beat through a setting so real I'd like to apply for citizenship.
Thanks for sharing - I hope this story continues!
(Rating based on chapters 1-3)
Author's Response:
You got me there, I play a lot of yuri visual novels and read a good amount of 'reincarnated into the an otome character' manga and manhua XD
And this is genuinely one of the best compliments I have ever received <3
[Report This]Date: March 14 2023 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 1: How It Begins
Amazing start! Hope it continues.
Unrelated, but your description says you have other profiles? Where can I find them?
[Report This]Date: March 14 2023 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 1: How It Begins
The plot thickens... Characters behaving in some ways counter to what Katie knows of them (like Cayna), and others in ways she expected from the start (Gremoria).
Something tells me Kaya's in more trouble than Katie by the time all's said and done, though.
Author's Response:
Indeed~
There seems to be unknown forces at work here. Hopefully Katie can sniff them out!
And as for Kaya...wait and see~
Date: March 13 2023 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 1: How It Begins
I've never expected a story with otome game settings here, let alone yuri one.
The premise is really interesting, added to fav and looking forward to future chapters!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Considering the increase in manga with that premise, I thought it would be fun to spin my own take on it.
Date: March 11 2023 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 1: How It Begins
Now this is a nice surprise! I'm already a fan of revenge stories, especially given how unfair things are to tinies, so this will be a fun twist on the usual size story tropes. Go gettem Katie!
Author's Response:
Oh yeah, revenge stories are the best~
[Report This]Date: March 11 2023 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 1: How It Begins
I am a simple person. I see yuri and size shenanigans I give five stars. Seriously though, very good introduction.
Due to her actions and reaction before being transported, I doubt Katie will run away. She seems a stubborn protagonist and I like it.
Thanks for writing and sharing! Already added to my favorites.
PS.: Sorry for any misspelling. Although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Katie certainly can be stubborn where Prima is involved. She has ideas on how to give her a happy ending, and definitely isn't afraid to use them!
[Report This]Date: March 11 2023 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 1: How It Begins
I shall eagerly watch those experiments with magic! And if you want, I and can DM you some of thous food for thought. Your the wordsmith and this is your story.
Fair enough on bikini-plate, its even more ridiculous then the heels (I can guess some balancing or ‘sure-footedness’/friction/stickiness enchantment applies would solve that). And with what magic might be able to do, nothing stop people from wearing skintight armour as cloths, making metal as light, flexible and comfy (or even more then) silk, let alone just how far the magic can truly go. Im sure you can fit this into just passive world building as they get mentioned or relevant.
And wonder if there are other fantasy races then just the fairies, cause some cat-girls or a dragon/lizard girl(full anthro and not just a girl with horns, slit eyes, wings, and gradin scaled hands) doesn’t sound too bad. You have to say anything, us reader shall have to see.
Thanks for the rapid responses! I eagerly await the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: March 11 2023 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 1: How It Begins
Obviously she isn’t!!
Its just going to be interesting to see just how far she bend things, not just in story beats, but magic and in world stuff. Cause I cauls make a university semester essay on all the experiments and questions on the magic system that would need to be considered and what various answers might lead do and could be used for practical purposes. Let alone the good size stuff.
Then theres of course my own hopes for what to see in it, but that would be long.
Would recommend Tori Transmigrated for a real interesting take on this Otom game genre, and how in game/story beats are more complicated when becoming a real wold.
Whatever truly things was going in with Felicia in the end or being chosen as the spy is probably way more complicated I bet.
P.S. Wonder it its one of those fantasy worlds with boob/bikini plate armour and even serious high heels in battle, and what the in universe explanation and practicalities (since they are very impractical to fight in) of them/how they make them work? So something to answer eventually. Use readers will have to see.
Author's Response:
I have plans in mind on how she's gonna be changing the world she's in. Will definitely take some time, but being able to understand how physical elements work and being able to directly influence it with magic.
And there will be plenty of size play stuff still between then~
Felicia does have a complicated backstory, but we'll get to that later!
(Also, there are indeed bikini armors! Though they are not often used, since they are highly impractical. There's a handful of artisans that apply powerful warding magic to the armor to make it work, but most women avoid exposing themselves like that. Especially since they can just get those enchantments on regular armor.)
[Report This]Date: March 11 2023 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 1: How It Begins
Finally! Someone is trying the other tropes other webnovels are based on! So this should be good! Only thing missing os someone doing a serious attempt at a LitRPG/System one. Or even just the hero summoning.
Obvious recommend it Overly Sarcastic Productions Trope Talk to get some good ideas, and how to use the tropes to the best degree. Plus, as someone from Earth with earth knowledge in top of the game’s meta knowledge, that should make her magic extra powerful or interesting on top of what the lore normal said. So lots of experiments to run and see just how much she can break the magic too. Other obvious is some counter spells or antimagic field to counter the shrinking, spells, potions, levitation, and wing illusions, and ensuring there a lot of stuff recording it or with good witness. That reveal of Felicia could mean a good size scene at that moment, IF it happens.
Maybe also, even if mean to Gremoria, ask the king to have more controls available on her to prevent such rash decisions, being far more mature in asking it should go a long way
Sorry for a bit of review bloat, bit this should be interesting.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I thought it was a fun trend to try and jump in on with a sizey take.
Not to give away spoilers, but Katie definitely has ways of altering the storyline using what she knows. She has no intentions of letting herself die like that XD