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Reviewer: ittybittyman Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05 2023 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Incident

great setup, lots of good details. Cant wait to meet the family. Also, who is Hailey? 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the comment.

Hailey is introduced in the 2nd chapter, chapter 1 is supposed to be in the form of a report, only introducing the main character.

Chapter 2 and 3 are up.



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