[Report This]Date: March 19 2014 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
This review will be harsh but I think you need to hear it. This story was not a total waste but it wasn't that good either. Detail is a must, but it shouldn't wash out the story. There is so much that you could do with a story like this that one chapter doesn't do it justice. In fact, with your permission, I'd like to try my hand at this exact story, I'd give you credit for the original story of course. What do ya say?
[Report This]Date: June 21 2011 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
It was very short, you just kept going 'then this happened'.
There wasn't nearly enough description
Overall i still enjoyed it though, just think it could've been much better.
[Report This]Date: April 28 2007 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
I personally find the incest genre to be un-sexy. However, replacing "mum" with "older woman" in my mind as I read...X...you nailed it!!! Awesome!
[Report This]Date: May 07 2006 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
A very intriguing story idea
Author's Response: Thank You !
I really enjoyed writing it.
[Report This]Date: April 15 2006 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
A good story. I enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thank You !
I really enjoyed writing it.
[Report This]Date: March 23 2006 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is probably the first story I've ever read like this, to be honest I was a bit skeptical at first, because I didn't think it could be well written, but despite some errors, it was well done. It was a hot and lovely story.
Keep up the good work.
My rating. 6 stars. Above average.
Author's Response: Thank You !
I really enjoyed writing it.