[Report This]Date: May 08 2023 10:54 PM Title: Thursday Afternoon
That was a fun adventure of Tim seeing how dangerous the world is out there. Also how hard it is to be found if lost. Julia would have to find tighter confines to make sure he doesn't escape like this time. Maybe placing him in her bra right on her nipple so she feels him.
It would be interesting to see if the neighbors catch on, either Sandra or Mckenzie. Especially Mckenzie. I think that if Mckenzie finds him, Aunt Julia can talk her into giving him back, but after Mckenzie has some fun with him.
Author's Response: This chapter definitely leaves some room for different scenarios involving the Peterson women, and I thought long and hard about how I wanted things to proceed over the next couple of days; although, to be honest, I’m still not entirely sure what I ultimately want. I want things to make sense, so I think I may leave it up to my readers.
[Report This]Date: April 28 2023 2:08 AM Title: Thursday Morning
Now that Tim is taped to Julia’s foot, I think she needs to put some socks and shoes on and go run some errands around town. Would love to see Julia sew Tim into her panties annd other clothing and then wear him daily. Excellent chapter! Can’t wait to read what happens next.
Author's Response:
Well, I’ve been contemplating the kind of scenario you’re describing of being out in public with a concealed tiny on their person. While Julia’s personality certainly fits the giantess I envision in this scenario, I think the overall plot of this particular story doesn’t quite fit Julia going out in public. It really all comes down to the overall secrecy surrounding Tim’s shrinkage, as no one else is really supposed to know about him.
That being said, I’ve been considering having such a scenario in a future story, where people shrinking isn’t completely a secret, and I think a few of the things you suggested will work well there. Furthermore, Julia still has a lot to do around the house, both inside and out…
Date: April 27 2023 12:52 AM Title: Thursday Morning
What an amazing story!
Really loved the whole vagina insertion section there, even if it was a bit quick, really hope in the future Julia uses Tim again the same way, and maybe even decide to keep him in there as another way of hidding him away while keeping her pleasent~
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback.
[Report This]Date: April 25 2023 7:24 PM Title: Sunday
Been accompanying this story for a while now, and I must praise how well written it is!!
Still, I know the aunt is the main star of the show, BUT I would be really happy to see more interactions with the mom! Since she is gentle and caring with her son, well, there could be some gentle and caring scenes! Some foot massage perhaps, or the two playing on a pool or something. Maybe she remembering how good it was when he was a small kid, and being more maternal to him. Not a popular preference on this fetish I know, but it would be nice and give her some spotlight, and in character with the mom I think.
But thanks for this lovely story! I will keep an eye out for new chapters!
Author's Response:
Well, first off, thanks for the encouragement and for taking the time to leave a review.
So, it’s true, this story is more about the interactions between Tim and Julia—basically the “domineering family member” trope—to practice my writing for my upcoming novel “Little, Big Brother”. While the whole “maternal giantess” trope is not something that really appeals to me, I have discovered that my tendencies to hyper-focus on tropes that only I find erotic might be things that don’t appeal to, or even turn off other readers. For example, my stories tend to always have feet interactions, and there are plenty of readers that just aren’t into feet, so they don’t read any of my works, even when some of my larger works have plenty of chapters without feet interactions.
That being said, for me, I think I like exploring the “maternal giantess” trope in this story in a different light, not necessarily in a sexual sense, but in the loving, yet semi-absent minded sense. Basically, treating the tiny person with love and caring when they are aware of a tiny person’s presence, but then becoming the unaware giantess when the tiny person becomes too small, and they don’t realize the dangers they put the tiny person in just going about their daily routines, kind of like the whole washing machine scene.
I am planning an upcoming chapter that will focus more on the mom rather than the aunt, but that will be more of what I described above. However, your suggestion has certainly given me something to think about, and as a result, I think I’m really going to focus on playing up the kind, loving giantess aspect of the mother and aunt characters in my “Little, Big Brother” story.
Date: April 11 2023 8:55 AM Title: Sunday
Nice to see a calm before the storm, if it were. Just curious, but would you ever add Tim getting eaten and ending up in some girl's stomach but alive. or would being eaten be more of a death sentence?
Author's Response:
Yeah, at first, this last chapter in the previous one more together, but I decided to split them up and give the leaders a little break from all the action.
So, I know this is fiction, but I usually want to display a sense of realism to my stories; while most likely an inch tall person being stepped or sat on would surely squish them, being eaten would most definitely be a death sentence in my book, which is why most of my “vore” scenarios are more mouth play and close calls. That being said, I do like the idea of having a tiny being swallowed as a way to end a story, but it has to be the right story.
[Report This]Date: April 07 2023 8:09 PM Title: Wednesday Evening
I always am excited when I see that a new chapter is posted. Any chance Tim may....get smaller 🤔
Author's Response: Well, all of the remaining shrinking formula is at his mother’s lab, and Tim hasn’t grown nor shrunk anymore since Sunday, so he’s probably staying one-inch tall for a while. Of course, if Natalie were to bring the formula home with her…
[Report This]Date: April 05 2023 12:48 PM Title: Sunday
This story is so good! I really like your writing style and I hope to see more panty/insertion action in the coming chapters
Author's Response:
Well, thank you for the words of encouragement; I’m glad you approve.
Obviously, I don’t want to spoil anything, but I guarantee you’ll see more “panty play” in the future…😉
Date: April 04 2023 8:50 AM Title: Wednesday Evening
I thoroughly enjoyed the last part of this chapter, hopefully his aunts inhibitions were lowered by the toe-curling orgasm he delivered. I'd love to see her intentionally put him to use this way from now on...
One criticism I'd like to point out is that Tim's constant yelling of "AUNT JULIA HELP" gets very repetitive and a little annoying. Especially when he should know she's ignoring him and intentionally stuck him there in the first place.
Author's Response:
Oh, Aunt Julia’s inhibitions have definitely been lowered at this point…and she’s most certainly not done having fun just yet.
Furthermore, yes, I can certainly see how Tim’s complaints and shouts can get repetitive. I think they need to start out demanding, then get frantic and pleading, then basically just be screams of pain and not directed at anyone, so I think that’s how I might change this type of situation in the future.
Thanks for the critique!
Author's Response:
Oh, Aunt Julia’s inhibitions have definitely been lowered at this point…and she’s most certainly not done having fun just yet.
Furthermore, yes, I can certainly see how Tim’s complaints and shouts can get repetitive. I think they need to start out demanding, then get frantic and pleading, then basically just be screams of pain and not directed at anyone, so I think that’s how I might change this type of situation in the future.
Thanks for the critique!
[Report This]Date: April 03 2023 11:03 PM Title: Wednesday Evening
Amazing chapter! It was great how it went from aware to unaware and back to unaware.
It is neat to see the Aunt juggling between what is pushing it too far and what is okay for her to do him. Even what she might have thought was too far might be too tempting, wanting to draw it nearer to where she thinks it is okay. I hope there is more pussy where Tim pleases her more or she finds some way for him to stay inside her for a long period of time without dying.
Author's Response:
Yes, I actually like going from aware to unaware in certain situations as a way of showing a playful giantess taking things too far. I really wanted Julia’s character to start out being playfully dominant, then escalate things as she explores all the fun she can have with a one-inch-tall character.
There’s still more fun to be had, so keep checking back for new chapters!
[Report This]Date: March 31 2023 9:58 PM Title: Wednesday Morning
I love this story! The unaware scenarios are written really well. I can’t wait to see what happens to poor Tim.
Author's Response: Thank you. Unaware scenarios are my favorite, so I really want to make sure they are detailed and well written.
Date: March 28 2023 10:04 PM Title: Wednesday Morning
Great
Author's Response: Great ‘good’, or great ‘sarcastic’?
[Report This]Date: March 28 2023 1:57 AM Title: Wednesday Morning
Mann... Poor Tim can't catch a break.
Author's Response: …And things certainly aren’t looking to get much better.
[Report This]Date: March 27 2023 8:03 PM Title: Sunday
FINALLY some 🍑content🥵🔥. Please more and more ass. Maybe even some gas, or a lot.
Author's Response:
Oh, then you’ll DEFINITELY love the next chapter when Julia’s workout continues…
Plus, I’m thinking about adding some ass content with Natalie as well…
[Report This]Date: March 27 2023 4:44 PM Title: Wednesday Morning
It is good to see that Natalie is becoming more aware of incidents like this with Tim and Aunt Julia but not the full scope. The accident she has with him really helps Julia's case that there can be accidents. If there is constant accidents, there might be some worries that Aunt Julia is doing something. Aunt Julia will have to think of something to get Natalie back on her side. Either by blackmailing Tim with photos, or torturing him to be quiet. She can also fabricate photos of Tim in dangerous places and say that Tim keeps putting himself in those situations. A lot of different options of how Julia keeps getting away with it.
It is great to see a yoga scene where the tiny person is put into tight places on woman's body during a workout.
Author's Response:
So, one of the things that I addressed in my recent revisions was Natalie’s obliviousness towards what’s going on at home while she’s at work, along with Tim’s hesitancy to speak up about his mistreatment. I tried to address this and play up the blackmail aspect of the plot in this latest chapter, while still leaving Julia room to continue having her fun, but I also know that if I want to keep story somewhat believable, I will have to make some adjustments to the plot moving forward to ensure everything stays a secret. I think the torture route is the one I will ultimately take, but there’s also some gentle interactions in future chapters that I want to preserve as well, so I’ll have to make sure I get the right balance.
Ah, the whole “tiny stuck with a giantess while she works out” motif, another scenario I really don’t see enough of. I really like this kind of scenario, both aware and unaware. While “Babysitter Trouble” and “With Great Power…” really played up the unaware aspect of this motif, I really wanted to explore what a (somewhat) aware scenario would look like. I’m also proud that was able to link this back to Tim’s vision in Chapter 2; you know, trying to provide some foreshadowing…oh, and the workout’s not over yet! 😉
Thanks for the suggestions, and the review! Keep ‘em comin’!
[Report This]Date: March 27 2023 4:09 PM Title: Wednesday Morning
If I were Tim I'd definitely be playing up any potential injury or asphyxiation to scare/worry his aunt... at least temporarily. A little bit of payback and a short reprieve while she panics? Of course it'd probably end up backfiring and infuriating her. I'm sure she'd think up some creative punishment once his bluff is called.
Although I'm actually amazed he isn't covered in bruises or suffering from any broken bones/fractured ribs yet.
Even if Tim survives the week I don't know how Julia is going to keep getting away with it.
Author's Response:
So, one of the things that I addressed in my recent revisions was Natalie’s obliviousness towards what’s going on at home while she’s at work, along with Tim’s hesitancy to speak up about his mistreatment. I tried to address this in this latest chapter while still leaving Julia room to continue having her fun, but I also know that if I want the story to be somewhat believable, I will have to make some adjustments to the plot moving forward to keep everything a secret.
Your idea about feigning an injury to avoid further punishment does leave some room for exploration, however, and that might be something to consider.
Furthermore, I have eluded to Tim suffering some minor injuries, like feeling battered and bruised, but I usually like my shrinkies to be a little more resilient. I know it may not be completely believable, but I did partly justify this thought process in one of the review’s to my “Babysitter Trouble” novel. It also necessary for a Shrinkie to be stepped on and survive being stuck to a giant foot.
In any case, thanks for the critique; I appreciate the feedback!
Date: March 21 2023 3:44 PM Title: Sunday
It's nice to see a Laundry machine in GTS material. You really don't see a lot of it. By the way, will you be doing what-ifs like in your Babysitting story?
Author's Response:
Yes, as I mentioned in the story notes, the laundry machine is a shrinking trope I don’t see a lot in GTS stories, and so think that might be something people can explore more of. I always liked the idea of a tiny getting lost in his wife’s/girlfriend’s panties and mixed in with the laundry, struggling for freedom amidst a mound of clothes. It’s one of a few scenarios that I want to explore and expand upon.
I haven’t really considered doing any what-if scenarios with this story like in my other stories, but more and more, I am thinking that later on in the week, when more characters come into the mix, there’s certainly sone possibilities for branching storylines, so I’ve also not totally ruled it out. Certainly food for thought.
[Report This]Date: March 14 2023 8:01 PM Title: Tuesday Evening
I absolutely love the mom adding to his sufferings completely unaware. I would love to see Tim getting trapped in her clothes at some point, even if Julia puts him there as some sort of punishment.
Overall it's a great story so far, very engaging for sure!
Author's Response:
Well, as Tim’s mother, Natalie is going to remain extra cautious with regards to her son throughout the story. Natalie loves Tim, and would never to anything to purposely hurt him, so any other “scenarios” involving her would have to be of the unaware variety. However, you have given me some food for thought, as I’m finding it harder for her to remain oblivious towards Julia’s treatment of Tim, and something like this might help keep Tim quiet about his mistreatment.
Anyway, thanks for the suggestions. They’re always welcomed.
Date: March 14 2023 1:21 AM Title: Tuesday Evening
I could barely read the text, you may have to try reformatting it, it's too small to read properly.
And increasing the text size isn't working on the widget.
Author's Response:
Sorry about that. I also couldn’t adjust the font size on the website, so I just updated the chapter by pasting the text in a larger font. Hopefully, that works better for everyone.
Thanks for letting me know!
[Report This]Date: March 11 2023 3:53 PM Title: Tuesday Afternoon
Julia doesn’t strike me as evil. She is carefree, haughty and clearly has something about Tim that pushes her buttons. She is not evil like I’d say Shannon was, but Tim IS really scared of her.
There is foreshadowing of many things coming tiny Tim’s way and I really
enjoy how the dynamic is gaining momentum.
Let’s wait and see. Out in the yard is bound to have other things, albeit not as big as Julia, big enough to threaten her nephew.
And man, it’s really good to see you back. Thanks for writing and sharing with us here. I’ve said it and I will say it again: you write the best feet and unaware scenarios.
Hope you have a nice weekend. This one also goes into my favorites!
Author's Response:
Yes, I wanted Julia to be dominant and playful, while not just jumping to cartoonishly evil. I also wanted her transition to seem natural and not forced, so I hope that aspect of my writing has facilitated that.
And yes, it’s good to be back and posting stories/chapters again. I wanted to get far enough ahead before posting so that I can keep a consistent schedule regardless of life events. I haven’t finished the story just yet, but I WILL get it finished eventually, so no incomplete stories here (I really hate that, btw).
As always, thanks for reading, and for the review. Hope to hear from you again.
[Report This]Date: March 10 2023 1:11 PM Title: Tuesday Afternoon
Great chapter. Liked him being located on Aunt Julia's as she went to sunbath.
I do wonder if the neighbor girl will have any part in this?
Author's Response:
Yes, this chapter was inspired by a combination of a picture I posted on Deviant Art, and a personal fantasy of being trapped in a beautiful woman’s cleavage while she’s sunbathing.
In actuality, I retroactively added in the ending to this chapter after brainstorming the events that will occur later on in the week, so definitely expect to see the neighbor girl again 😉
Thanks for the review!