[Report This]Date: March 11 2023 3:53 PM Title: Tuesday Afternoon
Julia doesn’t strike me as evil. She is carefree, haughty and clearly has something about Tim that pushes her buttons. She is not evil like I’d say Shannon was, but Tim IS really scared of her.
There is foreshadowing of many things coming tiny Tim’s way and I really
enjoy how the dynamic is gaining momentum.
Let’s wait and see. Out in the yard is bound to have other things, albeit not as big as Julia, big enough to threaten her nephew.
And man, it’s really good to see you back. Thanks for writing and sharing with us here. I’ve said it and I will say it again: you write the best feet and unaware scenarios.
Hope you have a nice weekend. This one also goes into my favorites!
Author's Response:
Yes, I wanted Julia to be dominant and playful, while not just jumping to cartoonishly evil. I also wanted her transition to seem natural and not forced, so I hope that aspect of my writing has facilitated that.
And yes, it’s good to be back and posting stories/chapters again. I wanted to get far enough ahead before posting so that I can keep a consistent schedule regardless of life events. I haven’t finished the story just yet, but I WILL get it finished eventually, so no incomplete stories here (I really hate that, btw).
As always, thanks for reading, and for the review. Hope to hear from you again.
[Report This]Date: March 10 2023 1:11 PM Title: Tuesday Afternoon
Great chapter. Liked him being located on Aunt Julia's as she went to sunbath.
I do wonder if the neighbor girl will have any part in this?
Author's Response:
Yes, this chapter was inspired by a combination of a picture I posted on Deviant Art, and a personal fantasy of being trapped in a beautiful woman’s cleavage while she’s sunbathing.
In actuality, I retroactively added in the ending to this chapter after brainstorming the events that will occur later on in the week, so definitely expect to see the neighbor girl again 😉
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: March 08 2023 10:22 PM Title: Tuesday Afternoon
I'm loving the story! The aunt being a little perverse with the nephew is perfect hahah I hope he gets back under her feet soon
Author's Response:
Oh, trust me, that perversion is going to continue…and Tiny Tim hasn’t escaped Aunt Julia’s feet yet.
I will say, however, that as a fellow foot man, I’d overlooked the fact that not everyone else is into feet. Some people like some parts of the Giantess/Shrink trope, but not others. I realized that a lot of my chapters involved, or will involve, feet in some respect, so I wanted to create some chapters with little or no feet to provide a more well-rounded experience, like focusing more on vore and breasts in this latest chapter. That way everyone can find at least one chapter they can enjoy.
Thanks for your review!
Date: March 08 2023 5:04 PM Title: Tuesday Afternoon
Ah, exciting stuff, can't wait to see where this goes, new characters mean new opportunities. Are you planning on lasting as long as Babysitter Troubles?
Author's Response:
Well, I wasn’t planning on this story going for as long, or having as many chapters as Babysitter Trouble, but as it’s currently going, each day is going to be split up into at least two parts. In fact, Tuesday and Wednesday both ended up having so much content that I’ve actually split them into 3 chapters each. I guess, even when I’m trying to be concise, I end up writing too much. Lol!
Without spoiling anything, I will confirm that the characters I introduced will show up in a later chapter, but that’s all I’m willing to say at the moment.
In any case, thanks for reading, and for the quick review.