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Reviewer: Cameron99 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2023 5:34 AM Title: A "Conversation" With Peyton

Been really enjoying this one. Loved to finally see Peyton get her feet worshipped by him a bit. Really hope to see more of that. 



Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: syn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2023 2:33 AM Title: A "Conversation" With Peyton

so this is actually my first review on the site but had to do one for this chapter for how well it was written. as someone who is more into teasing over overt violence i was kinda scared how this story was progressing(main reason i liked this one over the beaumonts, but that's just personal preference) but that ending really threw me into a loop. the reasoning peyton gave was very apt because i as a reader was also forgetting all the inconsistencies, which just goes to show in tense moments ones may forget logical thinking(although looking back at it the cartoonishly evil narrative should of been a sign but whatever). Anyways great chapter and hope to see the story continue.



Author's Response:

I’m really happy you decided to review the story. That must mean you liked it enough to do so! The story will focus mostly on teasing. I really like that, although it might tip over into other areas her and there, teasing will be the prominent feature. And that’s very interesting how even you as the reader didn’t notice the inconsistencies… but to be fair, we have to use our suspension of belief to read any of these stories 😂


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