[Report This]Date: March 11 2023 9:11 AM Title: Thanksgiving Break: Derrick and Quinn
I love Mallory and her attempt to 'rescue' Derrick. The funny thing is that she's not far off the mark when looking back at chapter one and the vore club plotting tiny kidnap. It's kind of interesting seeing Quinn compare herself to Penelope because I feel like she could have easily become her. All it would have taken is for her to succeed in her plans before developing a friendship with Derrick. Maybe in another timeline Penelope was also a member of the vore club, then Quinn's path would have been set in stone.
Author's Response:
Quinn probably lacks the inherent sociopathy, but she was definitely on track to do some mean stuff which she'd have probably regretted down the line. I like to think Iris would have dragged her back to sanity somehow if it got that bad.
[Report This]Date: March 11 2023 8:27 AM Title: Thanksgiving Break: Derrick and Quinn
I've loved this story! Everything was just awesome, the references to all your other stories were sick. The drama was done really well in this one, you're always so good about ensuring plot points aren't Dues Ex Machinas, in this case the spiders.
I hope we get to see more of Mallory in the future. I saw a lot of potential with her and I was hoping that when she caught Derrick she'd blackmail Quinn by threatening to tell their parents he was sneaking to her room and to keep her quiet Mallory would get to keep Derrick for the night.
The gang has had a wild first semester, I wonder if we'll see any more of theirs down the line.
Author's Response:
It has been a wild semester huh? We might return to see more of this world at some point, there's a lot of potential stories with it and it's a more relaxing and meandering setting than the fantasy or sci-fi ones.
[Report This]Date: March 11 2023 1:30 AM Title: Thanksgiving Break: Derrick and Quinn
What a Great Story, Well written and I love how you bring out their personalities. Looking forward to reading about Kelly and Iris and how they spent their Thanksgiving together. It will be sad to see this story finished though.
Author's Response:
All stories have to end unfortunately, we've got two more chapters with our friends here but as silly as it sounds I like to let my characters ride off into the sunset after a point. I get a little sad about ending them too but I really feel it's gotta be done.