[Report This]Date: January 20 2023 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 2
Angsty hate-not hate sex. Nice.
Date: January 18 2023 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 2
Hold up, Dante might be an incel? Fits the characterization I guess. Kind of liking the references put in now, does well for the premise of the story. Hope Dante might reexamine his outlook in life, stepping out the pit of hatred and into some warm GTS love!
Author's Response:
That's definitely the goal, haha
Date: January 18 2023 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 2
If this is 'just entertaining yourself' then you've got this writing this nailed. Keep it up, can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
hah it's definitely a mix of entertaining myself and others. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: January 17 2023 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
This is one of the best dynamics I’ve read on this site. You’ve really hit this out of the park, I can tell already. I excitedly await the next chapter.
Author's Response:
that really means the world to me, thank you so much for saying that.
[Report This]Date: January 17 2023 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 2
This is a new and interesting dynamic for a story.
Author's Response:
glad you think so! originality is a really important factor to me, so thank you
[Report This]Date: January 17 2023 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 2
Awesome 2nd chapter! Dante and Paige are two opposites that just can’t help but attract. Excellent buildup to the soon-to-be main event! Can’t wait to see how things go in the next chapter!
Author's Response:
ive been having a lot of fun with their dynamic, and ill try to conclude their "main event" as authentically to their characters as I can. thanks for reading :)