[Report This]Date: January 21 2023 5:08 AM Title: An Objection
Potential typo:”Isabelle’s eyes went wide, and she screamed one final time as a boot the size of a house thundered down on her, wiping her from existence in a divine show of wrath.”
“Cynthia just chuckled, then slipped her boot off. She held it up to him, letting him see the sole that had crushed the rival priestess, and he grimaced, nodding slowly as she slowly put her foot back in.”
So did her clothes grow with her or not? Based on the first quote, they did, but the second quote suggests they didn’t.
Excellent climax regardless.
Can’t wait to see how the story wraps up!
Author's Response:
To clarify yes her clothes did grow with her, the implication is that what's left of Isabelle was on the boot meaning that she really did get stomped and it wasn't an illusion. A grisly way to go, but you don't piss off a goddess in her own temple in front of a devout follower like that.
[Report This]Date: January 21 2023 3:15 AM Title: An Objection
Haha, but you worked in a 'huckleberry'! That's almost as good as a 'snu snu'!
Author's Response: Yeah I watched Tombstone last week so Val Kilmer was sticking with me a bit lol.
[Report This]Date: January 21 2023 2:57 AM Title: An Objection
Try and tell me that duel wasn't a reference to Big Iron.
Great work as always.
Author's Response: It was absolutely a Big Iron reference, along with Tombstone lol.
[Report This]Date: January 20 2023 10:44 PM Title: An Objection
"You may now snu snu the groom!"
Phenomenal work, can't wait for the conclusion of the story.
Author's Response:
I've been fighting the temptation to put the term "snu-snu" in this story for 80,000 words lol
"I never thought I'd die this way, but I'd always sort of hoped..."
[Report This]Date: January 20 2023 10:29 PM Title: An Objection
A great story. I totally love it. I would love it if you would write another like this in the future. I will be looking at some of your other work. And looking forward to any new stuff.
Thanks
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you liked it! We have just a little more to go to cap everything off. If you're looking for my stories that are similar in overall complexity to this I would recommend Abduction, One Year Lease, and Reunion.