Date: April 04 2024 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Home
Amazing chapter. Can't wait for more fun and size comparisons.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! This is the last chapter for the Paul and Ae Ri story, but I'm planning on some epilogue chapters that will be third person. Hopefully that'll deliver on the size comparisons!
[Report This]Date: April 04 2024 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Home
Excellent read. Not going to lie, I would’ve liked to have seen more of an exploration into sizes that fall between 2’11” and 3,” but that’s more of a personal preference than it is a criticism. This was an epic read for sure. You should be proud!
Author's Response: That is completely fair! To be honest, I think I'm not as good around these smaller sizes which is why I didn't focus on them too much. That and also this was supposed to be a shorter story which ended up getting longer and longer. If I planned for something EVEN LONGER I would have fleshed them out a bit more. However, thank you so much for the kind words! I'm glad you liked the story and I am super proud that it's had as much positive feedback as it has :)
Date: April 04 2024 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Home
How tall Ae Ri now?
We know from Chapter 1 that Paul is gonna be 5 inches but Ae Ri has gotta be at least 13 feet by now
Author's Response:
Oh fuck. I thought I wrote 3 inches in the first chapter... I should have checked. Consider that retconned to 3 inches!
As for Ae Ri, I worked around the diminishing returns of the transfers as Paul got smaller so calculated her clocking in at around 12'5 :)
He shrunk 32 inches (ish) and she gained 13 inches. I didn't get super into the maths but I thought that made some sense since his mass had decreased so much