[Report This]Date: June 16 2023 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 12 - The ties that bind
This was absolutely one of the most intense and nerve-wracking chapters of yours I’ve read. Absolutely fantastic.
You conveyed the sheer terror of the situation so well, excellently building up the suspense throughout.
Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Hey, thank you so much! I wasn't sure if it would actually come across as tense so I'm very, very happy it did! Hopefully the pay off at the end delivered too ;)
I'm working on the next chapter but very slowly. I hope it won't be too delayed!
[Report This]Date: June 15 2023 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 12 - The ties that bind
What a chapter! You really hit that psycho bitch part. Never before did I read a stalking part written so well and detailed. Bravo! I wish you the best of luck with your real life chores and hope to read much more of you in the future.
Your writing is some of the best I have ever seen and a part of me hopes to one day see a mega growth stoy written by you. Just some evil ex wife or gf becoming the giganta (but bigger) version of the Homelander combined with some mind control powers written in your style and with your imagination. One can only dream :D .
Wish you a great week and the best of luck. (Sorry for any mistakes, I`m sadly not a native speaker)
PS: Being an amateur still, I tried to cooked up a few pictures of Ae Ri and what she could (possibly) look like in the future, do you want to see them?
Author's Response:
That's an amazing set of compliments! Thank you so, so much! I love villains and evil characters so I think I put a lot of time into them, haha. I'm super happy that you're enjoying it so much!
I might struggle at the larger sizes but a giganta(-er) female, ex, homelander with some powerful pheromones could be a lot of fun to write. Like Amber from my other story but even bigger! Maybe I'll do a short story sometime!
The chores are going slowly but I'm still writing so hopefully the next chapter won't be too delayed.
I would LOVE to see your rendition of Ae Ri sometime! I'll DM you through the gtsworld route once I have more time!
P. S. Your English is great, don't worry!