Date: April 26 2024 8:17 PM Title: Epilogue - You're not sorry... Not yet
Nice epilogue!
How tall did Ae Ri get? It seems that she and Felicia were fairly compatible considering that there was enough of a transfer for her to burst out of the clothes.
Also, how small did Felicia shrink? For even Charlette to be a giantess to her, she can only be a couple of MILLIMETERS at best!
I'm hoping for more epilogue chapters!
After all, there is still the large size recevoir for Ae Ri to grow with.
Maybe have Ae Ri offer her high school "friends" a well-paid job under her. They initially don't know it came from her and they are shocked upon seeing what she has become! She then proceeds to use the size recevoir to become a true giantess as they watch before taking the girls as her servants, legally bound to her by the contracts they signed!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
I'm thinking Ae Ri is about feet tall, which would be about 3 foot of growth. I wouldn't say they're incredibly compatible but I just like Ae Ri being big >:) Felicia is less than an inch tall but I wouldn't say millimetres (to be honest I didn't pay as much attention to her final size though)
There might very well be more epilogue chapters but I don't think those "friends" would even be in the same country as Ae Ri currently!
Date: April 04 2024 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Home
Amazing chapter. Can't wait for more fun and size comparisons.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! This is the last chapter for the Paul and Ae Ri story, but I'm planning on some epilogue chapters that will be third person. Hopefully that'll deliver on the size comparisons!
[Report This]Date: April 04 2024 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Home
Excellent read. Not going to lie, I would’ve liked to have seen more of an exploration into sizes that fall between 2’11” and 3,” but that’s more of a personal preference than it is a criticism. This was an epic read for sure. You should be proud!
Author's Response: That is completely fair! To be honest, I think I'm not as good around these smaller sizes which is why I didn't focus on them too much. That and also this was supposed to be a shorter story which ended up getting longer and longer. If I planned for something EVEN LONGER I would have fleshed them out a bit more. However, thank you so much for the kind words! I'm glad you liked the story and I am super proud that it's had as much positive feedback as it has :)
Date: April 04 2024 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Home
How tall Ae Ri now?
We know from Chapter 1 that Paul is gonna be 5 inches but Ae Ri has gotta be at least 13 feet by now
Author's Response:
Oh fuck. I thought I wrote 3 inches in the first chapter... I should have checked. Consider that retconned to 3 inches!
As for Ae Ri, I worked around the diminishing returns of the transfers as Paul got smaller so calculated her clocking in at around 12'5 :)
He shrunk 32 inches (ish) and she gained 13 inches. I didn't get super into the maths but I thought that made some sense since his mass had decreased so much
[Report This]Date: March 10 2024 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Taking a break
Truly a comeback of titanic proportions! Another great chapter. Stay well.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Last chapter coming soon (which I can't believe). Hope it delivers too :)
[Report This]Date: January 22 2024 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Acceptance
In a cruel psychotic way... this was actually cute. Good job!
Author's Response:
I think you've just summed up the whole story to be honest, haha
[Report This]Date: November 29 2023 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Equilibrium state
That was hot! You really don't disappoint. I thought you would make her even smaller while being inside Ae Ri :D . Thanks again for the incredible update and stay well!
Author's Response:
Thank you! That means a lot. I always doubt the quality when I'm writing, haha.
I think Ae Ri would have made her smaller but... She still wanted something big enough to use as a toy!
Hope you stay well too :)
[Report This]Date: November 14 2023 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Pandora's box
This was great! Can't never go wrong with growing breasts. Now it would be kind of peotic if Charlotte later got literally crushed by her own mass, if you get me ;)
[Report This]Date: November 10 2023 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Pandora's box
This was great! Can't never go wrong with growing breasts. Now it would be kind of peotic if Charlotte later got literally crushed by her own mass, if you get me ;)
Author's Response:
I have a feeling you're going to enjoy the next chapter 👀
[Report This]Date: October 31 2023 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Pandora's box
My god man. Yes. I was really looking forward to Ae Ri at this sorta height and you delivered. The gaslighting too. She gives brain rot to the highest degree so I can't blame Paul.
If I can offer some constructive criticism though. Sometimes your descriptions are a bit indulgent and I think you could streamline your prose. In the erotic moments, description is great, but in some of the less action-packed moments you don't need to tell us everything Paul thinks. I know it's first person but less is more sometimes.
Anyway good shit dude, this is one of the few high-quality stories on this site, I'd love to offer feedback for future chapters if you're interested. You can email me at fosmat999@gmail.com or I'm on twitter/X too, up to you!
Author's Response:
Lmao! Indulgent descriptions are my vice, haha. I usually do two or three drafts of each chapter and they just get longer each draft. I should probably stop that, haha.
Thank you for the kind words and the great feedback! I'll for sure drop you an email some time :) I've loved a bunch of your stories (and I'm eager to read more of them (you've got quite the catalogue))!
[Report This]Date: October 31 2023 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Donate height today!
Awesome!
[Report This]Date: October 30 2023 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Donate height today!
Awesome!
Author's Response:
Glad you're liking it! Thank you for the support :)
[Report This]Date: August 06 2023 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Donate height today!
i made an account just to say i really love this story, probably my favorite i’ve read so far 🤩 you’ve done a really good job writing it, and it hits exactly the things i love which is a bonus :p thank you! i’ll definitely be looking forward to the next chapters
Author's Response:
Oh wow. Thank you so much for making an account just to say these super nice words 😭
I think I write stuff that I would like to read so it's probably just very lucky that we have similar tastes. Either way, I'm incredibly happy that you're enjoying it so much. I hope the next chapter continues to deliver!
Date: June 22 2023 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Donate height today!
Lovely story
I wish we have some growing milfs in here
Author's Response:
Not in this story but maybe in another. Someone reached out to discuss a commission with me :p
[Report This]Date: June 16 2023 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 12 - The ties that bind
This was absolutely one of the most intense and nerve-wracking chapters of yours I’ve read. Absolutely fantastic.
You conveyed the sheer terror of the situation so well, excellently building up the suspense throughout.
Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Hey, thank you so much! I wasn't sure if it would actually come across as tense so I'm very, very happy it did! Hopefully the pay off at the end delivered too ;)
I'm working on the next chapter but very slowly. I hope it won't be too delayed!
[Report This]Date: June 15 2023 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 12 - The ties that bind
What a chapter! You really hit that psycho bitch part. Never before did I read a stalking part written so well and detailed. Bravo! I wish you the best of luck with your real life chores and hope to read much more of you in the future.
Your writing is some of the best I have ever seen and a part of me hopes to one day see a mega growth stoy written by you. Just some evil ex wife or gf becoming the giganta (but bigger) version of the Homelander combined with some mind control powers written in your style and with your imagination. One can only dream :D .
Wish you a great week and the best of luck. (Sorry for any mistakes, I`m sadly not a native speaker)
PS: Being an amateur still, I tried to cooked up a few pictures of Ae Ri and what she could (possibly) look like in the future, do you want to see them?
Author's Response:
That's an amazing set of compliments! Thank you so, so much! I love villains and evil characters so I think I put a lot of time into them, haha. I'm super happy that you're enjoying it so much!
I might struggle at the larger sizes but a giganta(-er) female, ex, homelander with some powerful pheromones could be a lot of fun to write. Like Amber from my other story but even bigger! Maybe I'll do a short story sometime!
The chores are going slowly but I'm still writing so hopefully the next chapter won't be too delayed.
I would LOVE to see your rendition of Ae Ri sometime! I'll DM you through the gtsworld route once I have more time!
P. S. Your English is great, don't worry!
[Report This]Date: May 27 2023 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 11 - The cracks deepen
You continue to hit exactly the right balance of relationship dynamics and size terror with your stories. Personally I like the dark tones and I think you’ve done an excellent job of portraying the relationship here.
I’m looking forward to seeing how far this goes for Ae Ri. I’d love to see her take some size from other people and tower over her lil’ Paulie the next time they meet.
(I’d also love if she grew significantly bigger, but I don’t think that’s likely to happen.)
Whatever the future holds, great job so far!
Author's Response:
It's a hard balance to keep so I'm glad I've not messed it up :) I think anyone who read my last story probably loves the darker parts of this stuff. I enjoy writing those bits most so it probably shows 😅
I won't give away any spoilers but her final size hasn't been 100% decided just yet. Maybe I'll push the boundaries and make her VERY large
[Report This]Date: May 22 2023 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 11 - The cracks deepen
Ok, this is some GOOD stuff! The abusive, manipulating, power hungry bitch parts with her soft side peeking through from time to time are written so well. Can`t wait for more. And, while seeing that this is more of a mini gts type of story, believe me when I tell you: I hope she gets fucking massive!
I loved your prison story already, and every chapter I get reminded why, your writing is fucking great! So I just wanted to let you know you have found a real fan in me :D . Hoping to read more of you in the future.
PS: Are you doing small commissions? Yeah, I love your writing! <3
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I keep doubting my portrayal of Ae Ri and wondering if I've been too all over the place with her but it seems like I'm doing okay!
I'm actually not 100% sure on what to do with her final size to be honest. The height transfer tech wasn't designed to be for the more extreme transfers so I'm thinking there will be some diminishing returns. But yeah, I'm thinking her hunger for size is going to get her huge
I'm so, so happy to hear you enjoyed my first story too! It was such a niche theme with a lot of dark stuff so I wasn't sure how well it would do. There is for sure going to be a sequel for that too because I have ideas spilling out of my head. Plus, I can't end it on Vasquez being sad!
I haven't done any commissions yet and probably won't fit a while but I'd love to hear your idea. Can you dm me your email or message me on twitter? I think you can access both from my profile here :)
[Report This]Date: May 10 2023 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Donate height today!
Ae Ri is something else. She is seriously letting her increased size put her on a power trip. If Paul thinks she is a problem now, wait until they've basically switched heights.
Author's Response:
Hahaha, yeah I think it's only now that Paul is beginning to realise that perhaps that line from Spiderman is actually true.
Date: April 21 2023 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Happy families
Loved this chapter! I know you said you don’t have a big role for the mom, but plz consider it maybe just some height comparison, ex: realizing how small compared to her he truly his, towering over him with her presence.