[Report This]Date: June 28 2013 5:05 PM Title: Purple Sweatpants and Lipgloss
Please finish this story, it's sooooo good
Date: June 28 2013 4:18 PM Title: Kiss Me Where It Kurts
I remember this being among one of the first stories I ever read on here and I'm glad you decided to come back to it. It's a shame Kurt can't just appreciate the situation he's in. Maybe that's just my love for bbw giantess's talking.
Author's Response:
Lol, yeah... but as I said to JLZ in his review below, beauty is definitely in the eye of the beholder... just because Kurt finds Beth unattractive doesn't mean that everyone else has to think that way. The chapter just presents things from his perspective. There is no right or wrong when it comes to opinions of attractiveness.
[Report This]Date: June 28 2013 3:45 PM Title: April Fools
I've been waiting to see what happens with April forever.
Author's Response:
I'm not sure myself just yet. There are several ideas that have come to mind, but I haven't settled on anything so far. But rest assured, the next chapter will address that situation, though I can't guarantee when that will be because I am juggling other stories and of course the ups and downs of real life. Anyway, thanks for reading!
Date: March 18 2012 2:46 PM Title: Purple Sweatpants and Lipgloss
good story, i just dont like how you portray beth as an ugly character. This dichotomy of skinny and fat doesn't mean you should make everything else about these women a dichotomy: hannah beautiful, beth frumpy, hannah hot miniskirt, beth sweatpants (some guys like the sweatpants and i do too its just why does hannah get a miniskirt that is sexy and hot while beth gets something bland and covers her up), hell even the names sound completely polar, even though beth is a good name, its made to make the name hannah more appealing and intricet. if you continue story, please make beth a little more appealing. large women are beautiful too. thank you
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback. Yeah, I agree beauty is in the eye of the beholder... but did I actually say Beth was ugly? That may be what you inferred, but that may not be what was implied. I'll have to revisit this story at some point and look at what I wrote and see what direction to take it from there.
Date: January 25 2012 6:35 PM Title: Purple Sweatpants and Lipgloss
I LOVE Beth! We need to hear more from her. I hope she's gassy!
Date: December 30 2011 9:41 PM Title: Purple Sweatpants and Lipgloss
sorry this review was meant for dog eat dog. I loved this story too though
Date: December 30 2011 9:39 PM Title: Purple Sweatpants and Lipgloss
Great story but you should have the tables turned and a woman he wants to shrink more than any other woman ends up shrinking him but she can still see him and tortures him
[Report This]Date: January 18 2011 10:47 PM Title: Purple Sweatpants and Lipgloss
Love it,
would really appreciate it if you could finish this one though
I especially like the purple sweatpants and lipgloss one
Date: March 14 2010 1:56 AM Title: April Fools
not bad, i would rather have heard from the guys point of view though, hope you finish
Date: January 30 2010 6:17 AM Title: Purple Sweatpants and Lipgloss
ohh i love when she patted at her crotch and siad he is there
[Report This]Date: January 26 2010 2:01 PM Title: April Fools
OK! Let's start over.
Chozo? I love the intriguing new direction this chapter has taken.
[Report This]Date: January 25 2010 2:43 PM Title: Purple Sweatpants and Lipgloss
Really enjoying this one. Like the way you left us. Cliff Hanger.
[Report This]Date: September 17 2009 5:47 PM Title: Purple Sweatpants and Lipgloss
An intriguing beginning. Given the tags, I look forward to seeing what you'll make of this, but so far the writing style is nice and easy to read.
Date: September 14 2009 6:19 PM Title: Purple Sweatpants and Lipgloss
great start
[Report This]Date: September 11 2009 10:08 AM Title: Purple Sweatpants and Lipgloss
Nice opener. And, it's even nicer that I can be the first reviewer for one of your stories!
And, while I realize that the lion's share of this story will be devoted to Beth and Kurt, I'm just curious as to whether or not this chapter is going to be Hannah's only appearance.