Date: November 19 2022 12:09 AM Title: No Accidents
Chapter 3 was some quality content. Loved the idea of sentient smaller people existing in a universe where some portion of them are doomed to be brainless vegetables that get eaten. The combination of sex and vore was really potent. Loved the image of an orgy happening in Jen’s stomach.
Chapter 4 was interesting, although I would have split Tom and Delta’s segments into their own chapters. I’m guessing Delta was one of the people eaten in chapter 3. Chapter 5 was interesting. Mel has a bit of a malicious side when it comes to smaller people, doesn’t she?
Author's Response:
I really appreciate the FEEDback! Blurring the lines between sex and vore is my specialty.
I know I'm late to respond to these reviews but it really does mean a lot to me to see people enjoy my work and take time from their day to let me know.
In terms of splitting up chapters, I can certainly see how it gets a little disjointed. As the Interludes stand now I'm enjoying going back and retelling from their perspective, but I might reorganize things before checking the story complete box.
I hope you enjoy the new Interlude, let me know if the story is jumping around too much?
Thanks again for taking the time to enjoy my work <3