Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: November 20 2022 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 1 My tender and strict maid

Your story concept seems intriguing; but your use of pronouns is confusing {e.g. "Vanessa found it hard and hesitated to call him by her first name".  From "him" to "her", are they male or female?} and the ability to increase "text size" is messed up {i.e. the text overlaps at increased size}.

Nice potential, though you have to clean up your grammar, specifically your pronoun usage; and fix your text sizing issue.

Author's Response:

Well, I would do it if I didn't know English, since I use the translator to upload the novel, the original novel comes in Spanish but when translating it it gets complicated.