About his name: not sure why I would have preferred her to simply forget and keep going without it, but I see why you chose differently.
Were RFiD cards that common in 2006? (honest question)
"half a train car?the back cars"
plenty to learn from the experiences." <- closing quote just because.
possibly a misconfiguration on my end - does it say "?Wow?this is really exhaustive.?" with question marks instead of quotes?Anyway right after that: "She said allowed"
Dang, how do I choose a participant, I want to see them all! :D