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Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28 2022 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Second Chances [September 29th, 2006]

Since you rearranged the chapters one of my favorite quotes went away, let me preserve it for posterity:

"Okay everyone, I continue to be humbled by everyone's interest in Lori.  I have been dropping hints with increasingly less subtley and let me say now in no uncertain terms that the next installment of the R&R LAB SERIES will be centered on Lori."

:D :D :D


Good job on how you handled Becca pulling out, you made it look like something she would 99% do


gave myself a chance <- no opening quote

Wow, this is crazy <- no closing quote

(if you copy & paste a chapter into any programming editor, say eg notepad++, this kind of things show up, you'll just have to tell the editor which characters you're using to open/close quotes etc)


TIL that North Carolina has something in place to allow 16/17 year old to drive


I kinda wanted to write something about the move from 18 to 38 minutes, but I'm not sure I want to know how you picked that number... ;)

at least 38/5 = people in the Warren household won't complain their mom has been in the bathroom for too long




Author's Response:

I'm very glad people were so insistent about seeing more of Lori! 

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