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Reviewer: Layston Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2022 6:14 AM Title: Finding where to get lost

Really good so far! Can't wait to see what other ‘games' she has in store for him.

Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 15 2022 12:00 AM Title: Finding where to get lost

I get it, "WIP" {Work In Progress}.  With that said, your story is just starting to get interesting. 

Keep working at it.  It has a really nice set up so far, and limitless potential.

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