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Reviewer: Rise8 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 14 2022 2:18 AM Title: Not So Sleepy Hollow

The story is starting to get tense! I'd love if in the future one of the times Brendan shrinks he gets smaller then normal and Val decides to mess with him by having him get trapped in her thong.



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying it so far! I'll definitely see what I can do for you on the thong lol

Reviewer: Kessler Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2022 1:05 AM Title: Not So Sleepy Hollow

I mean Valeria did say she intended Brendan to be her eternal slave, most normal humans would croak after eighty to ninety years so he can't stay one forever if she intends to keep him that long.

Looking forward to this epic struggle between the forces of darkness over the book stolen by some random scientists who haven't the faintest clue what they've taken and insist on fucking around with it anyway.



Author's Response:

Indeed, there were many things Brendan has agreed to with Valeria that maybe he didn't quite understand. That said Valeria is hardly the worst person to be bound to for eternity, we will see some of her mom later in the story though...

Gotta say I cracked up when I read your apt description of our scientists. They're basically gender flipped versions of Herbert West from Reanimator and Victor Frankenstein from Frankenstein, neither of whom knew when to quit when dealing with supernatural forces they didn't understand. Both of them ended up paying a pretty high price for it in the end of their respective tales.

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