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Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03 2023 12:19 PM Title: A Walk by Moonlight

I really hope for side stories on this one



Author's Response:

Check back around Halloween

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2022 5:54 PM Title: A Walk by Moonlight

I just imagine how Brendan could service her at a smaller size. Small domme is such an underrated scenario.



Author's Response:

I don't know a ton of stories like that, I'll have to try one one of these days

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2022 11:46 AM Title: A Walk by Moonlight

The professor who wanted to get big ends up enjoying being small. Awesome twist. No tiny Valeria tho.



Author's Response:

I just like Valeria as always being the bigger one lol, the one in charge of things.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2022 9:05 AM Title: A Walk by Moonlight

Alex suggested to switch sizes with Candy on a weekly basis, Stain and West are having fun seeing the other side of things. If Alex feeds Brendan I wonder if she and Candy could have fun exploring the big world at tiny size together... That should be fun.



Author's Response: When exactly Brendan will become a vampire is up in the air, it might be tomorrow or it might be decades, but when he does Alex would probably be one of his (and Valeria's) first choices. Candy probably doesn't want to be big too often given she's wanted by the law, but she would probably want a few days now and then to go enjoy the world outside Alex's room.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26 2022 9:16 PM Title: A Walk by Moonlight

More a fan of reversal type of situations when small and cute girl shrinks someone so that they are smaller and cuter than her rather than some tall and strong bully gets more power. Is there any chance that girl bullied them not phisically but by some other means like popularity? Also, what kind of therapy? Medical or psychological one? Could the girl be a psychiatrist?



Author's Response: The idea I've got is that it's medical, like shrinking heals your body in the story and the couple needs a lengthy slow shrinking treatment.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26 2022 2:30 PM Title: A Walk by Moonlight

Have you thought about writing an Isekai hero story parody?

I RPed with a guy recently about a guy Isekai'ed to another world as a "toy hero"  with "toy hero system" that let's him easily get played with. The main skill "toy's stature" ofcourse reduces his size.  I just noticed that you watched anime and wrote fantasy world stuff and I have never seen this type of plot so... I figured I'd ask. If you want I can give some notes for inspiration.



Author's Response:

I haven't really considered an Isekai type story, though Welcome to Hell started with a parody of one lol. I actually am already planning out my next long story so I'm going to be busy with that one when Familiar is over. My next story is going to be about a couple who have to undergo shrinking therapy for medical reasons, and the person applying the shrinking is none other than the girl who used to bully them in high school. It's going to be a little more serious than some of my other ones, like think a couple slowly getting shrunk by someone they don't 100% trust, constantly wondering if she's shrinking them more because it's necessary or because she just thinks it's fun, etc.

Reviewer: Nightwatch Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 25 2022 6:03 PM Title: A Walk by Moonlight

Here to say Brandon is coming along nicely and there are a lot of pros about being a vampire though as for hetap I think it funny that she still angry about getting beat up by the goddess of death as for hetap traveling to other earths is hetap like the doctor that travel to different timelines but instead to different dimensions.



Author's Response:

Hotep is basically a gender flipped giantess themed version of HP Lovecraft's character Nyarlathotep, like the namesake she's an extremely powerful being who is the messenger and main servant of the Outer Gods, so moving between worlds is a fairly easy thing for her to do. Also like her namesake she holds grudges, and yeah she's still pissed about the events of Welcome to Hell, but obviously there's not a lot she can do to get back that them at this point.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25 2022 1:59 PM Title: A Walk by Moonlight

Is the last chapter planned for Halloween?



Author's Response:

My intent is to finish the story before or on Halloween, so the last chapter might come before then but either way we will go into November with this one having completed.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22 2022 4:52 PM Title: A Walk by Moonlight

The world with Hell and Heaven is rarely populated by ghosts and undead. Maybe Hotep can traverse to another universe?



Author's Response:

Yeah multiple dimensions is very much a lovecraft thing so I figured she could, Hell as it is in Welcome to Hell isn't around in this one.



Author's Response:

Yeah multiple dimensions is very much a lovecraft thing so I figured she could, Hell as it is in Welcome to Hell isn't around in this one.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22 2022 4:48 PM Title: A Walk by Moonlight

Idk about mixing this world with 'Welcome to Hell' one. It just has a different vibe for me. That was a divine-hell theme and this is some kind of Halloween one. 



Author's Response:

I figured the only one from there we'd see is Hotep, we already know what happens when you die in Welcome to Hell lol

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 15 2022 8:23 AM Title: A Walk by Moonlight

Top 5 things I'm eager to see in the future:

1. Tiny Valeria.

2. Candy refusing to get to her previous life.

3. Confused Horward not knowing what to do when he's the bigger one.

4. Ghost doing tricks on Candy.

5. Candy getting into NEET culture and becoming friends with Alex



Author's Response:

Can't promise everything here will happen but some of it will

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 14 2022 1:56 PM Title: A Walk by Moonlight

Hope for Alex-Candy bond where Alex gives Candy some thrill or whatever she lives for and Candy doesn't want to leave her Creepy NEET girl's pet life.



Author's Response: We'll see a little more of Candy's fate as the story goes, she's kind of put herself in deep shit obviously, luckily Alex is, if a gross NEET girl, not particularly cruel.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 14 2022 1:05 PM Title: A Walk by Moonlight

Cool. Dan can fight Candy as some Chips controling superhero by using storm of chips as a weapon. 

And if she doesn't want to wear cosplay costumes, just tickle her until she agrees. 

Still waiting for Valeria getting tiny after some exhausting fight. Tiny Lupe is not that interesting interesting, same with doctors, unless they are given to Howard. Will he get his revenge? I don't have any Idea of what Howard will do if he's the big one. Will they just ask him to shrink, with him simply following the command? That sounds unrealistic but for Howard? Who knows.



Author's Response:

Like most of my stories there's a big fight coming towards the end, that might be the one that makes Valeria tiny if anything does. As for the Doctors and Howard, I could imagine him getting some lighthearted revenge but for all of his complaining he still keeps hanging out with them doesn't he?

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2022 2:28 PM Title: A Walk by Moonlight

I imagine some 2500 year old philosopher who discovered the round earth and was killed because noone belived him. Now he tries to keep up to date with everything and help outstanding people with new inventions by haunting their dreams and giving hints. He helped with electricity, relativity theory, first computer, first phone, Internet, etc.


He even haunted a guy into making a gaming platform so that he could gather energy with Halloween game events and make new ghosts out of gamers. He also helped in creating Discord to have a special communication server for his fellow ghosts. He also likes playing chess pretending to be highest difficulty AI.


Something like this would be world class, they have enough influence to start world event. Like strong Warewolf pack leaders and vampire progenitors. Valeria is a class below. Not sure about her parents.



Author's Response:

Such a ghost would be on the level of a world class vampire, but I don't see Valeria getting to angry about ghost-boy unless she's worried he's going to start hurting people or something, overall I think she'd be happy to have him in her corner given all the other messed up stuff going on in this town haha

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12 2022 7:00 AM Title: A Walk by Moonlight

Ghost's story was indeed funny. Steam's terms especially.  What game allowes you to switch from living to undead on the spot?



Author's Response:

Ha, not sure, but I imagine the ghosts love Dead by Daylight

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12 2022 6:03 AM Title: A Walk by Moonlight

Also it would make sense for a size Vampire to shrink after losing to much energy, so there's really no need for ghost to shrink her. Just some drain curse.



Author's Response:

Valeria's big threats are the mad science trio at this point, who are less likely to curse her, but they have other surprises in store for our protags

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12 2022 5:45 AM Title: A Walk by Moonlight

She's not a world class Vampire, just one of the powerful ones. If the ghost is 10 times her age with legends about him all over the world I imagine he/she could do something. Tiny domme scenario are rare and underrated.



Author's Response: Well I don't have a ranking chart or anything but Valeria is implied to be the niece of ol' Dracula himself, while not on the level of her uncle or her mom she's up there. I would imagine a ghost's power is less based on their age and more based on notoriety, location, and maybe the circumstances of their death, Dan himself probably couldn't take her but like you said if there's some kind of ethereal ghost discord mod out there he could probably do it if Valeria went into his chat or something.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 10 2022 6:13 PM Title: A Walk by Moonlight

Just saying interesting ideas for later.

It would be funny for Valeria to want to remove the ghost but be shrunk by some 'Discord ghost chat moderator' that is willing to waste some of his energy to save his/her fellow ghost gamer. Chapter called 'there's always another ghost'.

Good opportunity for wolf- girl to get revenge or for tiny domme play with her familiar.  He'll probably listen to her anyway and could even give some full body massage or something.



Author's Response:

Brendan would definitely listen to tiny Valeria lol, her hypnosis might even still work, that said she's a size vampire so shrinking her would be a stretch even for a really powerful ghost, size changing is one of her primary focuses after all. That said our ghost has plenty of other targets for people who mess with him or Alex.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 10 2022 12:13 PM Title: A Walk by Moonlight

When I suggested ghost I didn't think there would be need to summon it. I'm kinda against the idea of ghost having a real small body. It just kinda goes against all ghost thematic where they are usually untouchable and use environment to play little tricks. Just don't want ghost story to be some another F/m play, which there are plenty of already.

Author's Response:

He's going to have an incorporeal form, but he's got to be summoned off the internet, at least that's how I thought it would work. I figured he could occasionally possess stuff, but like you were thinking he'd be the same size as Alex.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07 2022 11:26 PM Title: A Walk by Moonlight

20s is little girl for suppernatural and her being petite any confirms ghost's suspicions.



Author's Response:

lol well Ghost Boy is probably in his 30s or 40ss at most, obviously Valeria is at least half a century old going by her experiences with the Ottoman Empire,: Lupe is probably no older than she looks

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