[Report This]Date: September 21 2023 8:52 AM Title: The Temple Restored
I've been making my way through this story for a few days, because it was so goddamn good I just couldn't treat it like wankbait the way I tend to treat stories on this site. I tend to find that stories with good, nonsexual writing have a habit of failing as fetish material because the authors spend way too much time flexing their prose skills and not enough time doing things that Are Hot Fetish Content, but you've hit such a perfect balance of the two that I think this is probably now my #1 favorite story on the site. I can tell it was the perfect length because even though I would love to see more, I feel totally satisfied with how much there was - an extremely rare balance to hit. Well done and congratulations on producing Peak.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I like plot heavy porn myself, both for writing and consumption, but I always remember why you're here lol.
[Report This]Date: September 15 2022 9:38 PM Title: The Temple Restored
Good story all the way through. can’t wait to see what you do next!
And yeah, a tiny town definitely needs terrified villagers, suppose some solid illusions should do it, or maybe pseudo polymorph some kid of berry or regrowing things so rampagers could properly squash or eat them. And Zenovia can do the final touchups and behaviours imputing to her tastes and standards. And people volunteering or ”volunteering” to be small in them.
Then its making multiple one more people come along and who want it use it.
Could expand to smaller villages, bigger cities, different scaled, difference races or countries, even scenarios like fighting an army or being mercenary giantesses who have to kidnap the princes or princess intact or assassinate someone, or dress up as a dragon girl and kidnap a prince or princess for a night in the ‘Lair’.
Advertising/pamphlets/invitations will be easy at least, get a normal bit of paper, make the printing press plate as small as possible (easily enough at shrunken size, then copy past with some metal magic along the whole plate, not like its much metal to change in some weird way), then cut the paper properly and then grow them to normal size, and have possibly thousands or them from just once pieces of paper. Could come with some temp or once charge enchantments/spell scroll that do fun things or add to it. Aditinaly would let Zenovia have eyes thorough them all, and if any far older or existing followers are nearby or find them, shed know. And they could come join the temple, or send letter and organize new branches.
And what next adventures will happen will be a whole other campaign, by then Vann will probably have more precesses(or maybe even more permanent resents), probably more dwarven inventions, maybe even plans for a portal directly to Zenovia’s realm, see how Chadwick’s family and Eletha will continue to work things out longer term, other adventures in the meanwhile. will be by then. Eletha might even invite some other Elf friends of hers if she enjoys all this this much.
Who knows what will get together again, and what new people will show up along the way.
So thanks for writing this!
Author's Response:
The funny thing about Vann is that despite being a sub in the truest bdsm sense is he's actually very powerful, willful, and knowledgable and is rapidly becoming well versed in Zenovia's specific magics. He can probably figure out a way to do a lot of wild stuff, at least within the temple lol. Between Rumana's steampunk tech and Enid's nature magic he can accomplish a lot. At some point he will definitely be able to populate the tiny town somehow in a way that won't be lethal to the tinies but still give the giantess the excitement of squishing and eatint them.
Eletha making contact with Chadwicks relatives via Zenovia would be amusing, I imagine they have mixed opinions on the "relationship" through the years. Other elves might drop by, I like to think elves that pick up the adventurer lifestyle are considered insane by their fellows, like why risk death over silly quests when you're immortal? Still she probably knows a few.
Zenovia is obviously very happy with Vann, but if any of her followers have kept the faith this long she'd reward them handsomely.
Anyways who knows what the next campaign entails!