[Report This]Date: September 09 2022 5:42 AM Title: A Test of Faith
Amazing climax of a chapter, it was nice to see the party triumph over the Mistress. Glad we finally got to see Eletha fulfill her dream of being big
It was nice to see her humanity come out with her willing to sacrifice herself. And even more so with Chadwicks reaction to him thinking she was dead.
It was also emotional to see Tyra's reaction to when she saw Vann's remains and thinking he was dead. Speaking of which, I am glad Zenovia decided to choose Vann as her champion again. I do wonder what his reward will be for all of his devotion, especially when he restores her temple. I'm sure it will involve some pleasant female domination time lol.
This has been a great read and hopefully we have at least a few more chapters left in the tale. You've built a nice world and characters.
Author's Response:
We've got a few chapters left, yeah there were some emotional moments when people thought their friends were dead/dying, but ultimately everything came through okay. Zenovia definitely screwed up by even considering abandoning Vann, luckily he found a way to confront her on it and make her realize the mistake she was making, obviously he will be well rewarded.
[Report This]Date: September 08 2022 5:26 AM Title: A Test of Faith
The full Monty Python...
Great climax and payoff for Eletha.
I look forward to seeing how Vann rebuilds and helps 'consecrate' Zenovia's rebuilt temple. Presumably with lots of help from his friends.
Author's Response:
Eletha finally realized things about her human friends and herself, and when the chips were down she showed herself a real friend to Chadwick and everyone else in his line.
Vann has run the complete Black Knight gamut, being squished into paste and coming back as Vann the White, he took just a flesh wound and he got better lol.
Obviously Zenovia's temple will have a lot of fun for the protagonists
[Report This]Date: September 08 2022 2:25 AM Title: A Test of Faith
Loved this chapter to bits! I really liked the small window of vulnerability and humility Eletha had when she was about to die and I can't for her to have her talk with chadwick and the gang next chapter. Also cant wait to see how Zenovia rewards Vann after he nearly singlehandedly saved her religion even after she betrayed him without hesitation. Let's see how she makes it up to him. Also can't wait to see how you wrap up everyone else's subplots now that this volume is pretty much over.
Author's Response:
Yeah this chapter was a ride! Eletha had a bit of a breakthrough when she thought it was the end, though it didn't take her long to get back to her smug self. Zenovia did betray Vann rather quickly, but to her credit she also quickly realized what a mistake that was, like you said in a way Vann saved her too and he'll be handsomely rewarded beyond his resurrection.
Date: September 08 2022 12:11 AM Title: A Test of Faith
Epilogue next? Damn, that ended too fast. We saw Mistress action only in 1 chapter and there was no barefoot play with an elf. I like elfs in this setting because even if they dominate someone they can't make them miserable because of elf's "perfect" body: soft dainty pale feet, clean because being dirty is against their pride, tender toes that do not hurt even if they push you around.
Author's Response:
I was thinking we probably have 1 more chapter of the main plot and then another chapter of Vann rebuilding his temple and so on, I will be sure to get some barefoot with the elf in for you
[Report This]Date: September 07 2022 10:38 PM Title: A Test of Faith
Yeah this was a good chapter!
Devine court must be something, especially with enough gods involved.
And Eletha got what she wanted. Do hope the acts for the next few hours give some power to Zenovia, for her more direct involvement.
Also, for all that its going to be done next chapter, this almost feels like a the first session adventure to a longer campaign. After wards is the break period for levelling up, ‘off screen’ character development, and the world outside the party also moves forward and reacts to their actions.
Author's Response:
Yeah it's very much in the style of a tabletop campaign. There will probably be one more chapter to round out the main story and one final one on Zenovia's temple and Vann's efforts to re-establish it.