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Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2022 7:15 PM Title: In View of the Enemy

After reading up on We Help Each Other Get By last week, I’m really liking this story as well. Good premise and solid chemistry between the characters, especially like the dynamic between Vann, Tyra, and Eletha.



Author's Response:

Yeah, Vann, Tyra, and Eletha have their own thing going on, Vann and Tyra are obviously the usual childhood friends to lovers while Eletha is... well she's dealing with a lot, being an immortal elf and all.

Glad you liked We Help Each Other Get By! To recommend some of my other catalog One Year Lease is an evolution of the shrinking virus concept and Abduction is another shrinking epic you might like.

Reviewer: Sg20855 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2022 5:39 AM Title: In View of the Enemy

An interesting development with having the orc turn big again and the party shrinking. I'm glad to see her at full size and potentially joining the party. I'm definitely eager to see what happens in the future with her, hopefully we can see some foot domination action with her and Vann.

Also I thought it was really cute with the scene where Tyra was holding Vann closely during Vanns dream. I like Tyra and Vanns relationship, they have a nice sense of wholesomeness even with all the kinky stuff they do. 

It was also interesting to see Elethas reaction when mentioning Chadwick again and her being against him being with the dwarf. I wonder if it really is because of her being a dwarf or something else.

I also did read Conquest of Earth as well while it was being released. Great series as well, glad to be following another one of your works with this piece. As always, thanks for another chapter.



Author's Response:

Yeah Tyra and Vann have a softer side to their relationship which I try to highlight. Eletha and Chadwick... well that's complicated, obviously lol.

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2022 3:52 AM Title: In View of the Enemy

Looks like we're getting some Razita content next chapter. Hopefully she'll warm up to the party by the end of this. Really liked the fact that Tyra and Vann gave Eletha some pushback on her weird pet behavior towards Chadwick and themselves. The fact that she didn't deny that she was trying to get Tyra and Vann together just supports the fact that she needs to do some self reflexion before she alienates her "best friends" by treating them like theyre sheep beneath her judgement. Im surprised she considers Vann a best friend especially since she seemd to be indifferent to him before he got Zenovias favor. Makes me question if Tyra and Vann were also subliminally set up by Eletha but they seem to have already been heading in the childhood-friends to lovers direction before Eletha. Unless Eletha's been stalking orphans for a while which is just yikes.

Cant wait for the next chapter, and yeah that Zenovia disciple thing is as obvious as it is exciting!



Author's Response:

As Eletha says "they're new," you can take that to mean that Vann and Tyra's relationship is entirely organic. Obviously Eletha's actions and the party's reactions to them are coming to something of a head, and it's not a great time with them in the middle of the wilderness about to confront a would-be Dark Lady. 

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2022 2:19 AM Title: In View of the Enemy

Another good chapter!

Wth just the efficiency, Vann could make some money writing some papers on how to improve the other shrinking or growing disciplines, add to general scholarly knowledge. If combined with whoever regularly uses bags of holding, or the wagon/cart/crate version, shrink the cargo first, put them in, then shrink the containers too(if there is not incompatibility between the spacial and shrinking magic). 


And yeah, Eletha having it a bit rough dealing with Chadwick now, and probably on such and incredibly short timeframe of days compared to her previous years. 


And now thinking about it, would a shrunken person yield the same amount of blood as their full size, maybe once it leave them it rapidly unshrinks, or with some modification to the spell. Obviously that could work on Embiggen so far. Reason for this thought is a vampier could use this to drain full people using this, ore more easily hid them and eat them, and with Embiggen they could get a big source. Or a follower took several vampires and make a deal to let them drink while shrunk to max out blood. That a benefit for the vampires. 



Author's Response:

Zenovia's shrinking magic is probably mostly used offensively rather than as an enchantment, keep in mind she probably imagined those spells being used by powerful dominatrices shrinking their foes down to toy with them.I suppose a sufficiently powerful mage could shrink bags of holding within each other, plenty of DnD groups abuse the mechanic after all lol.

Eletha has a ways to go yet before she realizes why her friends don't approve of her behavior, even if she has the best of intentions.

A vampire could probably use shrinking magic to transport victims easier but would want to restore them to full size for proper feeding I'd think. I suppose shrinking potential thralls for the blood offering could be an easy way to create a lot at once.

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Reviewer: Barachiel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2022 11:44 PM Title: In View of the Enemy

Haven’t commented on the last few chapters because I don’t wanna sound like a broken record, but this story is wonderful. I’m excited to see Orc on Vann action.

Author's Response:

Razita will get her turn with Vann before the end, glad you're enjoying it so far!

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