[Report This]Date: January 05 2023 1:42 AM Title: Amber
Brilliant. just great. Many wanted to see what happened to Amber after the conclusion and you certainly did not disappoint Green. It has been a masterful chapter. I like that she was able to fix her relationship with Eve. But honestly I didn't like Eve's initial aggressiveness towards Amber. After all when she met Evan she wasn't exactly a saint. She wanted to enslave Evan and take his house. If the little boy hadn't made her fall in love with him, we'd have another story of the cruel giantess who gets away with it. As the saying goes "Let the one who is free of sin cast the first stone."
I guess Green is teaching us with this chapter that life takes many turns. We never know what will happen in the future. Well at least that's what this chapter conveyed to me. :)
Author's Response: Eve probably has some guilt tied to Amber, both for how she used to be and for how everything turned out. Amber's story has certainly been a winding road, but I like to think people can change if they want to, Amber had a big fall and it made her realize that her old life might not have been one she was happy with. Anyway glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: January 03 2023 5:16 PM Title: Amber
This chapter brought back so many elements from the original story, which was great to see.
Echoing what was said a few reviews down the page, the best one shots definitely leave you wanting more. For every old question this chapter answered, it seemed to leave something new to explore… How will things turn out for Ben? What is life like for the therapist Dr. Brown and her husband? What sort of stories do the Tiny Affairs agents like Laurie’s friend have from the field?
Could also be cool to see another chapter featuring Warren and Deandra at some point… the latter seems like she would have a pretty cool backstory.
Keep up your incredible storytelling, we all appreciate it!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it, there are probably endless possible stories from the Tiny Affairs office, Ben I see staying with Laurie in the same way Amber does, since like her he doesn't really have anywhere else to go. Anyways thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: January 03 2023 8:55 AM Title: Amber
Aaaargh that was so great! Commando SW Rambo Amber for president. Seriously that was such a fantastic story, with Reunion, slimed and now this you’ve been knocking out some of your best work ever recently. Amber emerged as easily one of the most compelling characters in OYL and it’s so cool to see her on her own adventure here. Also I love the wisdom of her realization that rather than a new romance what she really needed was a big juicy steely eyed WIN to feed the inner shark haha.
Author's Response:
Amber was a good villain in the main story, but I always kind of thought she'd find a way to happier state after the events of it. In the end yeah what Amber really needed was that win, something that would bring her confidence roaring back and as an added side bonus prove that she had in fact changed for the better.
[Report This]Date: January 03 2023 8:14 AM Title: Amber
This was definitely the one I was interested in the most, and you knocked it out of the park. I'm left wanting more lol.
Author's Response:
The best one shots leave you wishing there was more in my opinion, thanks for the review!