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Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2022 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The weekend ahead

Wow, the descriptions are very much so on point. Perhaps I find them a little bit too long at times personally, but objectively speaking, I think they’re near perfect in terms of quality. Characterisation of both our male and female lead is quite strong too. With descriptions about them giving us a general idea, and they’re actions directly showing us. Little to no spelling or grammar issues from what I can tell too.

There’s also a greater world at large and a threat that needs to be kept at bay. I’m interested to see how these specific plot lines will interact with our main characters. 

Overall, this seems like it’s going to be a great entry.

Reviewer: bulfrog3232 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04 2022 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The weekend ahead

I absolutely loved the story. I'm so glad it got finished! I've been silently waiting since August for this chapter. Great job!

I'm also an infantry vet, So I really liked chapter 4, got the military vibe down pat.

Reviewer: Called70 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28 2022 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The weekend ahead

Interesting start, not gonna lie l wanna see how these two meet and how in earth they become a couple. 
Keep going, you got something with potential. 

Reviewer: Nanoname98 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2022 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The weekend ahead

Wow, I am absolutely amazed by this story! Love the character writing. Absolutely LOVE the setting (a superhero girlfriend is one of my favorites!!), really like the kinds of conflict we've seen so far, but especially also the endearing and wholesome interactions. I really enjoy how Jennifer uses (and abuses) her growth powers up to this point. The writing style is very vivid and paints a clear picture in my head. 

Can't wait to read more and see Jennifer in action as a heroine <3. 

Reviewer: Wizalex Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2022 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The weekend ahead

Really interesting introduction, especially as a proof of concept for further work.

I think the personality of the characters really shines through here. Love seeing a size-shifting giantess playing with her power too.

This looks like it could work really well as a ‘slice-of-life’ style story, with the action occurring as you’ve done here on the TV.

Hope to read more of this!

Reviewer: Greenanon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2022 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The weekend ahead

Love the contrast between the superhero lifestyle and the normal day to day living. I have to say Titaness deserves a raise, then she can buy a sturdier couch!

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2022 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The weekend ahead

Really excited to see how this story develops! I love the interactions between our protagonists and I cant wait to see more of them. They were just hanging out in the living room this entire chapter and you had me hooked.

I'd also really like to see more world building and information about the whole monster and bio weapon situation and how/why Jennifer got her powers. The world you set up here is really intriguing and it has me curious about the backstory even about how Jennifer and Francois met.

Keep up the good work! Hope to see more!

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