Not a fan of Tayla. Nea is bratty and ignorant, but she’s also bigoted and openly so. Tayla clearly likes humans but, based on her interaction with Smith, doesn’t really care about consent or see them as equals. I hope she gets a wake up call. Jolene is pretty cool though. I confess, I do like the dynamic of a human and Zetan that’s both consenting on both parts AND led by the Zetan. Ahem! Great chapter!

Author's Response:

Smith isn't really unwilling, even if the relationship is moving faster than maybe he'd expect or like. Tayla obviously has a better opinion of humans than her sister, but she's also a spoiled princess used to getting what she wants, Smith might need to have a heart to heart with her at some point to straighten her out. Glad you liked Jolene, she and "her" Zetans are fun to write.