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Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2022 11:38 AM Title: "For Science!" (Part 2)

Are you still planning to update the story? It's one of the best on here! Looking forward to reading more!

Author's Response:

I honestly have no idea when I'll continue this story. The main drive got lost along the way, so we'll see what happens. Could be a week, could be a year, could be never, I simply do not know.

Reviewer: GTS33 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2022 6:24 PM Title: "For Science!" (Part 2)

It’s been far too long since I’ve had the pleasure of reading a story this well written. Although it has it’s minor issues, it’s easily my favorite ongoing work on this site. If it ends up being a hundred chapters I wouldn’t even mind. 


My one criticism would be formatting. Sometimes the dialogues and descriptions mesh together in a way that isn’t pleasing to read. It’s an easy fix, surely. 


Keep up the good work! Any time I find a new chapter to this story it just makes my day :D


-gts33



Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far.

And yeah, formatting is a little wonky sometimes. Mostly cause I have no idea how to actually do it. I've been winging it the entire time, and seems like it's worked out so far.

My style also seems to change between every writing "session" I have. So it's a roulette what you're gonna get.

And you keep up the great work as well! Your Magna Gratia scratches another itch of mine, while my own scribbles deal with another.

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