[Report This]Date: April 18 2011 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
This story is a small gem!
Author's Response:
:D thanks
Date: October 29 2010 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
One thing bothers me about this. He shrinks when he's scared, but the smaller he gets the scarier everything would be.
So once he starts shrinking, he'd wouldn't stop until he died.
Still enjoyed it though
Author's Response:
I think there's a size cap on him. Thanks
Date: December 22 2009 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this and I can't wiat for more. It would be great to see Brooke drag it out and dehumanize and humiliate him, maybe even have her slowly crush each of his body parts before forcing him to beg her to finish the job.
Author's Response: Good thinkin mate. Thanks a lot for the comment :)
Date: July 02 2009 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent story can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks man :)
[Report This]Date: July 01 2009 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is one fine story alright, hope you continue on it. Brooke sounds just damn intimidating and hot at the same time. Maybe you could add a little voyuer scene or something where Nick is hiding from her, eh?
Author's Response: Thanks man. Mebbe I could ;)
Date: June 30 2009 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love how Brooke loses control of herself and how desperately Nick tries to fight his own emotions. The story is well written and there is great potential for a series here. Perhaps his condition is contagious? Or maybe he escapes his bonds and finds other people can be just as dangerous? Just the terror of fleeing from Brooke can cause him problems.
Thanks for a great read!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks a lot. I appreciate the comment and the thoughts, man.