[Report This]Date: June 29 2022 4:01 PM Title: May
Amber is a bitch, but so is karma
Date: June 28 2022 2:48 AM Title: May
Two things to point out, one in chapter 9 you use Laurie's name in place of Eve's
“Keep him overnight,” Laurie said with a grin as she walked out the door with Evan."
the other was in an earlier chapter when Even wasn't willing to jump out of a tree because of breaking a bone, even without the enhanced durability a shrinkee shouldn't suffer harm from a fall regardless of height for the same reason as squirrels and other small animals. Their low mass means that even at fast falling speeds in excess of terminal velocity the impact won't have enough energy to damage them, mass is just as important as speed in determining how hard of a landing something has.
Pedantic nitpicking aside it's a great story, hopefully a match up with tiny hunters he doesn't have to hold back the awful traps against will help rebuild Even's confidence.
Author's Response:
I went and fixed the typo.
As for Evan and lengthy falls, in any size story physics just go out the window at some point. That said, I imagine shrinkees to be slightly denser than other creatures their size, which is why they're relatively strong compared to say, rodents. Not enough to stop an incoming high heel of course, but enough that they have an edge over anything they're going to encounter the same size as them. Evan still isn't going to get any kind of serious injury from a fall from a tree, but he could get a minor one that could slow him down just enough for Eve to catch him, even if he'd be fine a little later that day.
Overall though I'm glad you're enjoying it, my sophomoric grasp of the sciences aside. Evan is definitely going to get to see the measure of himself by the end of this one.
[Report This]Date: June 28 2022 1:09 AM Title: May
Oh man, finally get to see Evan’s anti-hunter traps in action.
Author's Response:
Yep, this is the real deal
Date: June 27 2022 6:52 PM Title: May
oh, interesting! I thought Amber might call a hit on our protagonists with her tiny-hunter bf, but I wasn't expecting it to tie into the shrunken Amber plot line. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing where the next chapter goes.
Author's Response: Yeah there's not a lot of hiding that Amber is going down pretty soon, obviously a tiny-hunter BF is... interested.