Silly me, forgot my rating!

This is one of the first stories I've read on this platform, but I was taken away by how expertly the story is crafted. It's both a sensual good time exploring different "interests" for a wide spread appeal but also a great piece of literature period! I wish there was more context to where the shrinking virus came from and how Evan in particular came about it, as well as if they ever find a cure or if Evan is stuck at that size forever, but that's minor.

Awesome work! Would recommend to others!

Don’t mind me. I just wanted to be the 100th review. 

Those were some very eventful 12 months. Eve learning to see the wrong in her beliefs about tinies to eventually getting a tiny boyfriend and Amber receiving a load of karma.

I must say though, if there were to be a spinoff with Amber I kinda want it to be more than the typical redemption story arc of going around to apologise to all the people she wronged or hurt in the past, attending therapy and potentially finding a partner?

Specifically, I hope that there might be some sort of cure to the shrinkism but with the kicker being it is only effective for females, something something males having a Y chromosome that renders the cure ineffective. This would allow a sort of "happy ending" for Amber and yes I know she was a complete bitch but people can change.

Just wishful thinking but who knows right?

Here's a dumb idea for a spin off, that idea that tiny 'juices' could heal and extend lifespans gets shown to work which plays a role in the lives of several couples, introduces motivation for tiny hunting to continue despite being illegal, and spurs police departments into getting a specific section just to deal with tiny specific issues like that.

Great story; it has good plot, world building, and smut all together in one enjoyable package.

Absolutely outstanding story! Rare to see something that can seamlessly incorporate an engaging plot with the kinky stuff. In the future, would be amazing to see a spinoff in this setting. Would personally love to see something exploring the lives/backstories of Warren and Deandra or Charles and his wife. The overseas black market could also make for an interesting spinoff 

Author's Response:

Like I said I'm not opposed to revisiting this world but I don't know what that would look like, maybe an anthology or some one shots. Glad you liked it!

The pure novelty and humanity of the very concept is remarkable.

There is humor, suspension, some good exposition and world building... All good tings!

But in the end, as with most good storytelling; it's the interplay between the characters, and the details of their personality that connects the most.

This story is entertaining from the start and just when you think the character's have plateaued their development, a side interaction or surprise twist reveals hidden depths.

As for the intimacy; it gets emotional, it gets sexual and, at times, it gets cruel.
While featuring, and sometimes allowing the reader to revel in, cruel acts or fantasies, the story always keeps us ground with reality - taking care to portray the harm that can be done. Not only does this bring maturity to the work, but it makes those acts all the more tantalizing.

A great read, and one to remember - heck I've archived it!


Minor spoilers ahead:
If there is any room for growth here I'd point towards the main protagonist who never quiite transcends into being something more than a vehicle for the plot, though it's a close call at times!
My recommendation would be to hint through some interaction at Amber's private feelings - we almost always see her through the lens of Eve. As such it's never quite clear if it's about status, fear, pleasure, or all of the above.
A single, unfettered, scene showing Amber as she is in private before going of the deep end would really drive the character home I think.

Thanks Greenanon!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words. I'll take the criticisms under advisement, they're all pretty fair. I will say we will see a bit of Amber in the final chapter, though obviously far her height, no pun intended. Overall I'm really glad that people enjoyed this one, it was a bit of a different one for me since most of my stories are fairly goofy over the top adventures or straight gentle stuff.

You can smell the double cross coming a mile away. Don't think a house getting out back on the market will likely happen. When betrayal is on the cards, it's basically Murphy's law at this point. 

Honestly though, I wagered that Amber would try to go after Eve and Evan directly instead of hiring hunters. 

Where does Eve get these ideas to do with a shrinkee SO? Does she surf on subreddits for ideas? 

Also, I did read those other shrinkee stories you had when you released them. I have a bad habit of not leaving reviews for stories I really like. :(

Also how long if you got the virsue till u shrink im just wonder? Also funy even having a cold will going to doctor who told him he had shrinkiees