Date: July 03 2022 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 8: A Lesson Well Learned
Love this story! Can't wait for more!
Date: June 27 2022 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 8: A Lesson Well Learned
Emily really is a natural dom, feels like she was born for this. Really enjoying this story.
[Report This]Date: June 15 2022 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 8: A Lesson Well Learned
*A tiny passed out on the floor is seen, a sign is hammered into the floor with* "Deded by to much horny"
Ahem is very gud, really not sure what to say beyond that its well written.
Date: June 13 2022 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 8: A Lesson Well Learned
The party could be the perfect place for an unaware chapter an example mmmmmm... maybe Emily under the influence of alcohol forgets Allison who is trapped in her back pocket, and Sasha who knows where Allison is, decides to take advantage of the situation by doing some "experiments"
Author's Response:
I have some plans for the party, but I might be able to add in some unaware stuff. Might be a little hard cause the focus of the party is to "welcome" the new minis.
Date: June 13 2022 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 8: A Lesson Well Learned
Nice chapter. Maybe an unaware chapter where Allison gets put in the washing machine by Emily? Ohh and maybe an unaware chapter with Allison being stuck inside Emily’s shoe during cheerleading practice too! Anyways, good story so far!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I like the idea for some unaware stuff, so I'll try to fit it into the story. I'm not sure about the washing machine thing, cause that just seems violent for the sake of being violent. I might try to do a side chapter at some point with Ms. Hennings in the future which will likely have some unaware action :)
[Report This]Date: June 12 2022 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 8: A Lesson Well Learned
Absolutely great story so far. Love the main characters and their personalities. Really hope that Allison and Emily continue having fun together. This chapter in particular was a really nice way of including another person in the narrative. Having Emily learn new techniques from a variety of different sources could be a fun way to go with this, especially with the party coming up. I think there's probably a lot she can learn from Sasha there.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I really enjoyed writing this chapter and what I did with Nicole. I have some ideas for the party that I hope won't disappoint!