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Reviewer: Ensar Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11 2022 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 6: First Day of Classes

Will the new episode be shared in a few hours?

Author's Response:

Try a few minutes ;)

Reviewer: AliSins316131 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11 2022 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 6: First Day of Classes

Alison gets stuck in Mrs. Hennings shoes then Hennings notices this and places Alison in her warmer spot



Author's Response:

Not a bad idea, maybe if Alison keeps disrupting class, she'll need to be put somewhere less distracting ;)

Reviewer: Sheograth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2022 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 6: First Day of Classes

Really well done so far! The characterization of Alison and Emily has been top notch, and it's made all the size stuff even more enjoyable to read.

It's just really impressive for your first story, and I'll definitely keep an eye out as you continue this story!

As for character suggestions, Ms. Hennings could be interesting to explore in a side manner. Possibly with her not nothing a mini student approaching her desk.

Keep up the excellent work!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I worked hard to make Emily and Alison’s characters interesting and I’m glad that it payed off. 


Ms. Hennings certainly would be an interesting character to write for, but I might have some ideas for her. 


I hope you continue to enjoy my story :)

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