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Reviewer: Oldest18 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12 2024 8:24 PM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing

First of all, I just want to say that I have been following your stories for a long time now. I really love the way you write, I love nano, I love unaware. Hope you understand how much I appreciate your work. Never stop, you are great!

Have you thought about commissions? or make free stories based on requests in the comment field or direct messages? (I have several ideas anyways).



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, that is very generous praise to receive from a reader and fellow fan of unaware nano content.


And if you ever want to send me ideas, you can always find me in the GiantessWorld discord server. No guarantee I'll use them, but I am beginning to consider taking commissions soon. 

Reviewer: barabba9000 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12 2023 5:25 PM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing

Hey, glad you're back! I'd like to suggest you a story based on a previous story I've read. How can I contact you? 



Author's Response:

You can find me in the GiantessWorld Discord server

Reviewer: Griffter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2023 5:25 AM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing

I'm thoroughly enjoying all of the scenario's you're bringing to the table, both the unaware and aware scenes, the idea of being shrunken twice or three times with it and the sheer scales you describe so well, progressive shrinking is easily my favourite type of scenario and few rarely encapsulate so well, from the differing landscapes, the comparisons between sizes to the hopelessness and the indifference from the, now goddess', perspective - everytime I see this updated I'm excited to read it!

Had to create an account simply because I didn't want that to go unknown, I hope to see and read more from you in the future!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Continuous shrinking and nano sizes are the best.

And to create an account just to leave a review, that is an amazing thing to see as a writer so I hope to never disappoint in the future

Reviewer: barabba9000 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13 2023 4:34 PM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing

Welcome back! Missed your updates! 



Author's Response:

Thanks. Life got real hectic for me for the past couple of months

Reviewer: christiawi9 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 10 2023 11:35 AM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing

These stories are so good. The only down side is that they're too short and they leave you wanting more and more.

Great writing and even better premise. I look forward to every new chapter and hope to keep seeing more in the future.

Reviewer: barabba9000 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2022 1:26 PM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing

Oh well, I made the same comment twice XD BTW, take a look at it. It definitely suits your style. Maybe a shrinking lottery with people forced to live in a Nano city... But it wouldn't be an unaware story. And your unaware stories are simply stunning 



Author's Response:

All Good XD

And I gave it a read, really good stuff. And thanks again!

Reviewer: barabba9000 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2022 5:35 AM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing

Love the last chapter.. Take a look at the story brobdingnagians business, from the 10th chapter Impact... Pretty sure it could inspire you 

Reviewer: LtShadow Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16 2022 11:48 PM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing

Your writing is so good! so cool to meet a fn of these kind of unaware story's. Would love to see you do one of a tiny lost in a garden!



Author's Response:

That scenario might just be in the pipeline for a tale down the road

Thanks for the review. 

Reviewer: barabba9000 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2022 2:29 PM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing

Love this story! Please read the story brobdingnagians business. The tiny cities under the glass with the Chinese manager walking above them in the office. Maybe you could write a spinoff chapter, looks like a story you could appreciate



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. And thanks for the recommendation, I'll give it a read

Reviewer: barabba9000 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 06 2022 1:32 PM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing

Hope next time he is plastered under the giant's sole. Loved this chapter. 



Author's Response:

You never know what could happen in future tales

Reviewer: Derivergi Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 11 2022 6:47 PM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing

i liked the latest chapter, people rarely incorporate microscopic life to the well microscopic shrinking stories 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2022 10:27 AM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing

Loving all of these. Would like to see some end with the nanos just being stuck at their new size. That one where the razor knocked his shrink ray away I think would have been glorious to have end with him struggling to live in the left over stubble of the girls pubic hair like a mite from then on, etc.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I've floated the idea of having someone survive but haven't implemented that yet. Maybe in a future chapter or different title

Reviewer: Derivergi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 18 2022 9:47 AM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing

that last one was great, you are amazing at describing bodies as landscapes.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Qwajuu Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2022 2:19 PM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing

Keep up the great work! I loved Chapters 4 and 5 the most so far. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know!

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2022 4:09 AM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing

Part of me would have liked to have seen the mother finding out she stepped on her daughter.


After all, it was her shrinking ray, so the idea that her daughter had gotten shrunk wouldn't be far fetched.


In your opinion, do you think she figured it out eventually after being unable to find her daughter?



Author's Response:

The thought may come to her mind, that’s for the reader to consider. 

In the stories after, the users of the shrinking ray shrink the gun down with themselves. It this first story, the unexpected jolt she felt from using it on herself, dropping it immediately back in the drawer, preventing it from shrinking down too, and it was closed after bumping into it. 


Thanks for the 5-star rating!


Reviewer: barabba9000 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2022 7:56 PM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing

Love this story! 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Derivergi Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2022 3:48 PM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing

I absoulately love the size differences in your stories and hoe descriptive they are, bte I know this is a compilation of small stories but I would like to see a continuation to Greg's story 



Author's Response:

Thanks. I’ve always been more of a fan of nano-sized stories. 

And unfortunately for Greg, he was wiped out by an earth ending tsunami of lavender lotion and absorbed into his mother’s toe

Reviewer: Wutt117 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2022 2:28 AM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing

I really enjoyed this last chapter. I have no real criticisms just personally preference, I was hoping the sister to have accidentally crushed one of them, maybe just partially. I do like it when someone getting crushed is a bit prolonged, like instead of turning into paste immediately he might just get stuck on her sole like one of the crumbs and be smashed to bits slowly over a few steps, having his arms and legs snapped and then his core compressed and so on. 


Loving it all so far, can't wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks. I debated whether or not to take the violent route this chapter but went the quick death end. Be on the lookout for a later tale that goes down that route.  

Reviewer: Da Boss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 17 2022 7:35 PM Title: A Mysterious Gun Lookin' Thing

Really excited for this series.  Simple but filled with a ton of potential.  Looking forward to seeing where you go with it! 



Author's Response:

Thanks! My one weakness when it comes to story telling is lacking in details to paint the picture. I hope to work on that as I continue on

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