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Reviewer: szimi27 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2022 9:02 PM Title: The New Hire

I like happy endings. I wonder if she slowly starts to recognise them as intelligent beings

Reviewer: Sweatervest Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20 2022 6:28 PM Title: The New Hire

A great, yet brutal story. To your question on chapter 9, I would hope the tiniest have suffered enough and Elise realizes that. However, understand if that doesn't fit the theme.

Author's Response:

This response is @ all four of the previous responses, just figured it would be silly to reply to all, so picked the most recent.

I'm glad the consensus seems to be the happy end, to tell the truth, that was my preference as well. The option for an alternate chapter is still there, as vic suggested, but the "canon" ending has been set, and I'm gonna go write it now. Thanks for all the responses :)

Reviewer: szimi27 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20 2022 4:27 PM Title: The New Hire

I think they deserve a happy ending

Reviewer: liliannnwritesstuff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2022 12:17 PM Title: The New Hire

I love the story, the way the humans are just bugs to the aliens is truly excellent. Personally I'd like to see a good end to give the tiny people a break after all they've been through :P

Reviewer: vicgiantessadmirer Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 20 2022 8:18 AM Title: The New Hire

Something tells me Humanity is not going to be restored to their former glory, or even recognized ): I would still like to see the good ending regardless, but... Why not do two chapters, ending A, and B?

Reviewer: george42 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17 2022 9:54 PM Title: The New Hire

Absolutely loving it!



Author's Response: Thanks friend, got a few more chapters planned out, they should be coming over the next few days as I write them.

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