Reviewer: Bork69 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2024 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Periwinkle

Sup! I’ve been reading this story along with your other works for a few months now and I just want to say you’re an amazing writer. The amount of effort and dedication you put in unmatched and it these stories have been amazing. 

One of my favorite features of these stories is the POVs from the micros/nanos themselves, such as the the camera feeds off when the destruction happens from Kristen. It would be awesome if we saw the POV of the nano city that was crushed under Kristen’s toe at the end of the chapter as well as the POVs of the those trampled under Parker!

You’re a legend man, keep it up. 

Reviewer: Kamaeli Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2024 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Periwinkle

Real good stuff (as if that weren't always the case, lol).

This last chapter really opened up all kinds of possibilities for where the story can go, both short term and later down the line.

Janelle being a cop adds a unique spin and a perspective I can't say I've come across in a story before. So that's real exciting. I'd be lying though if I said I wasn't now hoping for a Secret Rooms version of GV Apartments Chapter 16 down the road, after the latest developments... haha

I'm looking forward to the reference pics as well, I think they add a lot to the imagination while still allowing readers to use their own imagination

Author's Response:

Hey Kam.  Thank you! 

I really hope all the opportunities lead to good places.  I hope I can spin Janelle in a way that people will really love or really hate to be honest.

I fixed and added the reference pics, adding them to the end of chapter 1.  Of course, not every reference picture is going to be exactly what I imagine, but if it helps it helps. 

Reviewer: Giantess Nation Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2024 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Periwinkle

Finally some interactions between Micros and Nanos! Great! Hopefully this is just the beginning and wasn't just a one-off. :)

I loved the part where Parker threatened to shit on the Prime Minister. I know this is a controversial opinion, but I wouldn't have minded if she actually did follow through on that threat. It would have been very funny at the very least. Also would have been a good way to have eliminated one of the rebel strongholds.

The devastation she caused by pissing in that dried up lake-bed and it overflowing was a very degrading way to go for all those who died from that though. Too bad they were innocent though, that also could have been a humiliating way to take out one of the rebel bases. Just simply crushing them is one thing, but pissing/shitting on them just degrades them even further and it sends a sort of message. It serves as a reminder to any future would-be rebels to reconsider their resistance, I guess.

That said, one thing that really gets me is how dried up the landscape is. I guess it makes sense because Ostrov hasn't seen rain in literally years, but its not something that's ever been touched upon before in any story I'm familiar with. It never comes up as an issue because in the rare cases where a story does feature a shrunken country or whatever, it doesn't tend to last very long, or the story ends before it goes into the point where the land dries up and dies like a desert like this. Its kinda sad tbh, but I guess its the realistic outcome.

The destruction of the town aside, Parker pissing on the land couldn't have done more harm to it than how it already was in that desertified condition. But despite the trees and stuff being dead, I imagine there's a lot of seeds and stuff laying around just waiting for rain to come, so Parker pissing on there might have brought some green back to the land, at least temporarily. So she may have actually helped the land in that sense. You could revisit this in a future chapter, about how Parker brought like back to the land where she pissed, or something. If they start to view her as some sort of goddess (albeit a lesser one than Kristen, obviously) then it could tie in with that, and this land might be considered some sort of holy ground, or something. I dunno.

I kinda wonder a little bit about the Flora and Fauna of Ostrov and if its just like that on our world, or if its exotic to ours or something. But even if its the same, it seems to me like they might want to preserve it as much as they can despite this drought causing everything to die off. I wonder if they couldn't find some way to extract the humidity from the air in the room they're in and somehow use that for irrigation or something?

I know that when they asked for Kristen's help with the water, it turned out to be a huge disaster. But I think now that you have micro-nano interaction happening, its something that maybe micros like Parker could help them out with? They're still huge af and can easily cause some accidental destruction, but obviously far less than Kristen, so maybe they could help with distribution of water (and food) across Ostrov? Like Kristen, could place it somewhere in the center of the room and then the Micros could help spread it around. I don't know how it works where the nanos were doing it by themselves, but obviously with micros helping them things would be much easier.

And just like how Micros like Parker can destroy Nano cities, they could also help out with the rebuilding too. Like that city which Kristen squished with her toe at the end of the chapter. It seems like an entire nano city is roughly equal in size and materials to a Micro skyscraper, or something like that. So Micros could help the Nanos rebuild that city pretty easily. They could also rebuild the cities to be much more durable too. As it is, Kristen or Ginny can pluck up a Micro skyscraper, train, plane, or whatever and interact with it like Kristen did with Parker chapters back. But the Nano cities are much more fragile and just crumble to dust with the slightest touch. But with Micros helping to rebuild these nano cities, they could be at least as durable ad the Micros' own stuff, and that way if Kristen or Ginny wanted to, they could then pluck up an entire nano city just like they could with a Micro skyscraper, to do whatever fun stuff they'd like with it. :)

The Nanos built their cities to be sprawling, but with Micros rebuilding them in a way similar to their skyscrapers, the newly rebuilt Nano cities could be much more vertical. They could even be hybrid things where its half-nano city but also half micro-skyscraper combined into one thing, and nanos and micros could co-habitate or something. I dunno, but there's certainly a lot of potential there.

I think pretty much ANYTHING that both Micros and Nanos build from the time they ended up in Kristen's rooms is probably built much more durably than how it was built on their own worlds, because now it HAS to be. No one in normal circumstances builds something around the idea that some miles-tall giant could decide to pluck it up from the ground on a whim, or that there'd be violent tremors caused by that giant moving around. But this is the reality these tiny people now face. The Nanos are at a disadvantage though, because they're much smaller and its harder for them to build stuff to a "pluckable" standard of durability, but with the help of the Micros, they could. :)

Author's Response:

Hello Nation.  I'm pretty sure I have some future ideas of how the nanos and micros can interact in the future as I don't want it to be a one off either, but I really have to think about how I want it to line up with the story. 

I wanted Parker to know how careless she had been while be so oblivious to her own power she had over the nanos, then really show her how insignificant she was in the shadow of Kristen.

Micro nano action could be symbiotic or predatory, I guess we will have to see.  

Reviewer: MeGo99 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25 2024 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Periwinkle

Thank you for this amazing chapter, please don't delay on us lol

Author's Response:

Thank you, I try not to!